VN Ren'Py Blurring the Walls [v0.5.28] [Torimiata]

[Torimiata]

Just be aware that early builds, like this one, don’t showcase the final version of the game. I went through a similar cycle with version 0.4.0 – tons of initial doubts as well if you check my previous posts or this thread history. This update has a certain theme of course but with the feedback I’ve received and the improvements already in the pipeline, some things will flow better.

However, if you’re looking for a 100% polished experience right now, this early build might not meet your expectations.

Despite this, I’m grateful for the support and constructive feedback and I'm already focusing on making 0.5.1 even better.

 

[huiAPPOAJ]

I'm happy for any new update because it means the project is not abandoned and there is always hope for something new. Despite that I'm not really a fan of the last update, especially the maze "teasing" and then the lesbo show which I just skimmed through to get to the actual meat but it was over right after that. I understand the author needs to prolong the updates as much as possible to milk the Patreons but this update felt like there was very little effort to push the actual NTS/NTR plot forward. Or maybe there was with the lesbian stuff but me and some others ITT didn't see it that way.

 

[xxbeefydadxx]

This update really went of the rails, shame on such a promising start.

Agree - It's unfortunately very common that devs have too many ideas, or too many directions they want to take the story. This just veered waay off track.

 

[LaudeMonk]

I didn't mind the yuri stuff in the update tbh, it was pretty hot, I was just hoping for a little more Terrace content in this update, at least a little more Terrace teasing, like:

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But is what it is, I do still enjoy some yuri in NTS content. Keep up the good work Tori ^^

 

[manjak8]

just discovered this game, amazing, finally some good fucking writing, and ai art is very consistent, the best part is ai allows more frequent updates, cause usually art is such time and effort consuming part that it makes us wait months for 5 new images

 

[alyssssssssss]

I didn't mind the yuri stuff in the update tbh, it was pretty hot, I was just hoping for a little more Terrace content in this update, at least a little more Terrace teasing, like:

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But is what it is, I do still enjoy some yuri in NTS content. Keep up the good work Tori ^^

Don't worry, this is just an appetizer, from the next updates you will see more Terrazza fucking with Ayumi and Ari, and MC having more handjobs, it is now customary to start the game calmly in the characters, then transform them into what most want, MC is taking the form of an idiot who accepts everything, or rather, a child who wants to see his toy used by others, Ayumi, started out as super in love, now she is in love, but the game that is transforming her into a slut is now a short step, Ari is crazy in her own right, she wants to be friends with MC, but she is interested in his entertainment, whether it is harmful or good for her friends, it doesn't matter, this is the game, there is porn and porn, this is porn that makes you laugh, without emotions, even if at the beginning, even the Dev's words, it would have been different than usual, but during this journey, the Dev also got lost.

 

[garmander]

I'm only really interested in the fappable scenes as an NTR/NTS enjoyer, so the only really enjoyable CGs/scenes from the new update were the scene where

Spoiler: near the beginning of the update

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and the scene with

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Both not really being 'real' or having any actual consequence really gave me blue balls though. The whole update, there wasn't any real tangible continuation or corruption increase to the heroine, more of the same just in a different scenario. I still like the game a lot and will play every update happily, but I, like everyone else I'm sure, are just dying for the actual meat and potatoes of the NTS to start happening.

 

[kristo0086]

I'm only really interested in the fappable scenes as an NTR/NTS enjoyer, so the only really enjoyable CGs/scenes from the new update were the scene where

Spoiler: near the beginning of the update

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and the scene with

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Both not really being 'real' or having any actual consequence really gave me blue balls though. The whole update, there wasn't any real tangible continuation or corruption increase to the heroine, more of the same just in a different scenario. I still like the game a lot and will play every update happily, but I, like everyone else I'm sure, are just dying for the actual meat and potatoes of the NTS to start happening.

I understand you. It is necessary to add a wank or a passionate kiss from the Terrace in the next update.

 

[elMeno88]

Actually I don’t agree with the one who’s saying this update is bad… this was like the best appertizer torimiata could do for prepare us to something even more corrupting

 

[elMeno88]

And the ayumi’s corruption actually is progressing, slowly of course, but still it is going on. like she literally was going 2nd base with ari and showed her pussy in public

 

[Gwynbleidd7]

Well, this update was not bad but it was not good either, I understand that the Patreon members who expected more are upset and I saw one of those who filtered the game. Well we just have to wait for the next update and I hope that this time we have a spicy scene of Ayumi with Terrace because if it's just words I would be dragging this out and it would be boring already. I'm not saying that you have to fuck her but you do have to touch her private parts etc.

 

[godpains]

Check

 

[Lmb55]

I love the amount of work and passion the dev has for this game.

That said, this felt like a filler update. Kind of like a filler episode of a anime, it's not Goku and Piccolo have to get a drivers license bad. But there was never a "oh shit, what's going to happen moment" that made me excited. It really needed that special something, perhaps the bar scene was meant to be the something but it just didn't do it for me.

I feel bad for calling it filler because this games filler is still better then most everything on the market, it just needed one really good (non-yuri) punch to knock it out.

 

[elMeno88]

Well, this update was not bad but it was not good either, I understand that the Patreon members who expected more are upset and I saw one of those who filtered the game. Well we just have to wait for the next update and I hope that this time we have a spicy scene of Ayumi with Terrace because if it's just words I would be dragging this out and it would be boring already. I'm not saying that you have to fuck her but you do have to touch her private parts etc.

But ari did touch her. Just because it was a lesbian scene it doesn’t mean that it is less corrupting

 

[doomulol]

i played alot of vns jap ver. most are heavy text based but this one is insane

 

[neroman76]

Well, I thought about supporting on Patreon in the last couple days. And honestly I´m glad I didn´t, even if I really, really love all previous updates. But the last one, puh, it was pure boredom except one scene. Absolutely subjetive but any kind of lesbian sex is by far the least appealing form of sex for me.

 

[kristo0086]

Well, I thought about supporting on Patreon in the last couple days. And honestly I´m glad I didn´t, even if I really, really love all previous updates. But the last one, puh, it was pure boredom except one scene. Absolutely subjetive but any kind of lesbian sex is by far the least appealing form of sex for me.

I agree with you. Male sex is better.

 

[Gwynbleidd7]

Well, I thought about supporting on Patreon in the last couple days. And honestly I´m glad I didn´t, even if I really, really love all previous updates. But the last one, puh, it was pure boredom except one scene. Absolutely subjetive but any kind of lesbian sex is by far the least appealing form of sex for me.

x2

 

[Adam_H11]

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I agree with you. Male sex is better.

 

[LynxLinks]

Well, I thought about supporting on Patreon in the last couple days. And honestly I´m glad I didn´t, even if I really, really love all previous updates. But the last one, puh, it was pure boredom except one scene. Absolutely subjetive but any kind of lesbian sex is by far the least appealing form of sex for me.

Now that the initial characters have been established and their kinks confirmed we interrupt our scheduled viewing with stuff that you can't fap to.

To be fair, there's clearly been a lot of work put in to the update, it's just that the storyline we expected was put in the freezer, I'm confident there will be a course correct in a couple of months.