VN Ren'Py Blurring the Walls [v0.5.4] [Torimiata]

[turbokinetics]

I think the dev is keeping the story strictly NTS, so the MC will always be in control, the only difference being in the level of Ayumi's teasing him and some scenes variations like in Ayumi/Ari scenes Ayumi is dominant - she's on top making Ari cum, Ayumi is submissive - Ari plays with her and makes her cum. And I totally like current 'vanilla NTS' setup and direction of the story, we get enough NTR stuff in on tons of other titles.

big facts. NTS needs more love. NTR blatantly is flooded in the market.

 

[turbokinetics]

-sometimes the dialogue sounds strange: in dom queen route blindfolded Ayumi says something like "i feel so in control. Like they're all studying me and I don't even know it" (makes no sense imo), Ayumi saying "i choose reliability" when targeting terrace feels a bit awkward since it doesn't sound all that hot in an otherwise exciting moment. etc.

not the only weird dialog. the part where ayumi talks about the office christmas party dragged on so long the dev started repeating a bunch of lines. MC literally said a variation of "I shouldnt like this" 3 sentences in a row. also at the pool with ayumi asking her 10 questions almost all the questions she asked they had already talked about previously so didnt make sense for him to not be able to answer them/ struggle so hard. like bro just say yes, you told her that just yesterday haha. interested to see where the game goes but i have a feeling ill wait til the NTS isnt blue balls to catch up again after i finish.

like has this really been in development for 2 years and no NTS sex? wtf?

 

[TheGooseter]

not the only weird dialog. the part where ayumi talks about the office christmas party dragged on so long the dev started repeating a bunch of lines. MC literally said a variation of "I shouldnt like this" 3 sentences in a row. also at the pool with ayumi asking her 10 questions almost all the questions she asked they had already talked about previously so didnt make sense for him to not be able to answer them/ struggle so hard. like bro just say yes, you told her that just yesterday haha. interested to see where the game goes but i have a feeling ill wait til the NTS isnt blue balls to catch up again after i finish.

like has this really been in development for 2 years and no NTS sex? wtf?

i agree that some of the older updates need its dialogue cleaned up 100%. But in my comment i was only talking about the most recent update.

Also you're giving yourself blue balls bro. We don't even have "nts sex" yet but this game STILL has a shitload of quality goon material. Every scene is deeply rooted in NTS so just give it a chance and you'll realize how peak ts is. There's no rule saying you can only bust to a sex scene. Enjoy the foreplay and dirty talk.

 

[turbokinetics]

i agree that some of the older updates need its dialogue cleaned up 100%. But in my comment i was only talking about the most recent update.

Also you're giving yourself blue balls bro. We don't even have "nts sex" yet but this game STILL has a shitload of quality goon material. Every scene is deeply rooted in NTS so just give it a chance and you'll realize how peak ts is. There's no rule saying you can only bust to a sex scene. Enjoy the foreplay and dirty talk.

i didnt say it blue balled me or didnt have any sex. i said nts sex specifically. its an nts game with no nts sex right? only speaking observation. im not even dogging the game. i enjoy it in all its flaws but the flaws are there. would have just suspected the game would be a lot further along . especially given how many assets are reused. dialog even in forplay still has to make sense was my point about the poolside question scene, and it didnt. like i said i'll check back on this game one day down the road before i hit the reviews, just not near enough content for a 2 year old game.

 

[closetperv90]

NooooooooOOOOoooo i need moooooooooooooooooooooore omfg 10/10

Theres so much content but im so greedy for more omg omg omgo mgomg

Someone wake me up when ayumi finally does the deed.

(also i hope theres MFM MFF with all the variations!!!!!)


Fuck this games hot. No fair no fair! LOL

 

[rollgeck]

i didnt say it blue balled me or didnt have any sex. i said nts sex specifically. its an nts game with no nts sex right? only speaking observation. im not even dogging the game. i enjoy it in all its flaws but the flaws are there. would have just suspected the game would be a lot further along . especially given how many assets are reused. dialog even in forplay still has to make sense was my point about the poolside question scene, and it didnt. like i said i'll check back on this game one day down the road before i hit the reviews, just not near enough content for a 2 year old game.

Well, the game has been reworked from the beginning for a few months (sure lots of people were somewhat displeased) and only the recent update finally features some new unseen yet content, and it was great. Also consider that the foreplay and gradual pushing the boundaries with no rush is exactly the point of this game. And you might be expecting too much from that nts sex scene - sure it'll be hot af and some sort of culmination, but it'll be just one scene, when it's finished you might find yourself blueballed even more .
And I don't know if that much stuff was reused, but even to rework existing and to create a new art of this quality especially with animations while keeping consistency and all the minor details on characters might take a shitload of time, probably weeks just for one scene.

 

[turbokinetics]

Well, the game has been reworked from the beginning for a few months (sure lots of people were somewhat displeased) and only the recent update finally features some new unseen yet content, and it was great. Also consider that the foreplay and gradual pushing the boundaries with no rush is exactly the point of this game. And you might be expecting too much from that nts sex scene - sure it'll be hot af and some sort of culmination, but it'll be just one scene, when it's finished you might find yourself blueballed even more .
And I don't know if that much stuff was reused, but even to rework existing and to create a new art of this quality especially with animations while keeping consistency and all the minor details on characters might take a shitload of time, probably weeks just for one scene.

id just like to see some kind of nts sex scene. i dont mind longer scenes, i get it pushes the tension. just some constructive criticism, if the dialog has to start repeating to that level its too long. im not a fan of reworks on active development games, should be done at the end and the older content can be replaced for a separate actual remaster. but that's just me. i dont hate this game or anything, in fact overall i really like it.

 

[Raferu]

id just like to see some kind of nts sex scene. i dont mind longer scenes, i get it pushes the tension. just some constructive criticism, if the dialog has to start repeating to that level its too long. im not a fan of reworks on active development games, should be done at the end and the older content can be replaced for a separate actual remaster. but that's just me. i dont hate this game or anything, in fact overall i really like it.

Oh no... actual constructive criticism... now Tori's haters and supporters are gonna come out in droves to fight again...

 

[Dimitry710]

Oh no... actual constructive criticism... now Tori's haters and supporters are gonna come out in droves to fight again...

I don't care, but: I've played both versions and the difference is noticeable.
Dialogue, animations, story, etc., etc.
Constructive criticism?
Don't make me laugh.
Download the game, it's there, play it, and compare it; it's simply superior in every way.
And I'm not even on Patreon, due to my financial situation.
But it's one of the few games that actually makes me want to give them some money. The same thing happened to me with Desert Stalker, my current favorite.

 

[hendrixx77]

im just patiently waiting for the ayumi x terrace sex scene, you know its going to be good i mean she basically lost her mind just by grinding against his cock while still clothed i can only imagine how wild and how hard she's going to ride it when he is inside of her for real

 

[Torimiata]

Appreciate all the recent supportive comments AND the constructive criticism

Even in the cases I disagree, I still appreciate the discussion it can create, as long as it's made in good faith.

That said, in terms of the decision to do the remake - I have said it before but it really is a decision I do not regret. The game feels much better now and with the v2 animations I'm working on behind the scenes I am even more excited about the future of the project.

I will admit it is taking a bit longer than I expected to get to the good stuff but we are definitely getting there.

 

[*THOR*]

Appreciate all the recent supportive comments AND the constructive criticism

Even in the cases I disagree, I still appreciate the discussion it can create, as long as it's made in good faith.

That said, in terms of the decision to do the remake - I have said it before but it really is a decision I do not regret. The game feels much better now and with the v2 animations I'm working on behind the scenes I am even more excited about the future of the project.

I will admit it is taking a bit longer than I expected to get to the good stuff but we are definitely getting there.

I'm very excited about what's coming, the game is going very well.

 

[HappyCrab]

I'm very excited about what's coming, the game is going very well.

I agree. Many of the games in this genre suffer from having too many characters that have little purpose in the story. A good author knows how to make a solid story from few characters. I've made this argument in the thread of another game but I'll make it here too: it's fine to have many characters, but in my opinion it works best when you first establish a setting along with the introduction of main characters and support characters, and then introduce more characters throughout the development of the story. It gets less muddled and it makes it easier for the reader to follow what's happening and which direction the story is going.

 

[FMarshallboy]

Appreciate all the recent supportive comments AND the constructive criticism

Even in the cases I disagree, I still appreciate the discussion it can create, as long as it's made in good faith.

That said, in terms of the decision to do the remake - I have said it before but it really is a decision I do not regret. The game feels much better now and with the v2 animations I'm working on behind the scenes I am even more excited about the future of the project.

I will admit it is taking a bit longer than I expected to get to the good stuff but we are definitely getting there.

When will the next and subsequent updates come?

 

[Raferu]

Constructive criticism?
Don't make me laugh.
Download the game, it's there, play it, and compare it; it's simply superior in every way.

I don't get where the hostility came from. I was agreeing with your take on the matter. But you do you, I guess.

 

[Poa963]

I used the translator to write this

I like the remake much more than the first version, not that I think the old version is bad, but because the remake has much better character development, but the main thing for me was the fact that the MC had already talked about his fetish to Ayumi.
The remake won me over when the MC and Ayumi talked about it, since in the first version the MC didn't talk about his fetish with Ayumi, and I found that very strange because in a matter of days, the old version was more advanced.
I usually just read what everyone says, but I wanted to say what I think about the remake and the old version since the moment MC and Ayumi talked in the pool.
for the people who read this i'm sorry for the english mistakes

 

[BloodDemon365]

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Hey everyone!

Bit of an unusual week, but making progress on multiple fronts.
Arc Progress:

• Outline: Complete ✅
• Script: 15-30% (DRAFT!)
• CGs: 0 (Still holding off until script is in a better state)

Working simultaneously on the public release with multiple improvements. No firm date yet as it depends on a couple of final touches, but expect development pace to pick up once this work is wrapped up.
Really enjoying the story theories popping up on Discord. Some are surprisingly close to my intentions for the next arc Not spoiling which ones, but you guys are sharp. I will try to surprise.
Also, on fanart, I try not to comment too much to avoid influencing things, but I do check it all out and some of the work is genuinely good. And it is always interesting to see what people request.
Animation:
Posted a more polished animation on Discord for Platinum if you haven't seen it. This has been eating up a significant chunk of time as I refine the process... lots of small technical issues to solve, but the potential is massive and I'm genuinely excited about where this is heading.
Got a good suggestion about sharing some deleted scenes for Platinum supporters. It's not the end goal for the tier rewards I have in mind, but it could serve as a nice interim bonus. Expect a post tomorrow with some behind-the-scenes content.
Appreciate all the support and patience.
Cheers,
Tori

 

[Swagylord1337]

big facts. NTS needs more love. NTR blatantly is flooded in the market.

erhm NTS is the one that flooded the market, devs try to make a NTR game but because of people keep pressuring them to do NTS, they have no other choise

 

[Raferu]

NTS is the one that flooded the market

Just because a good portion of the best NTR-related games happen to be NTS doesn't mean there are more NTS games out there. It just means NTS devs put more care into their games than the average NTR dev. And it's usually the NTR fans who pressure devs to make changes.