VN - Ren'Py - Blurry Lines [v0.2.1] [webmasterjunkie]

The renders could be optimized and the dialogue could use some realism, especially this early on, but that's just my opinion. I can see the potential.
What really drags it down is that it feels like a demo's worth of work for over a year of progress.

Yeah this ain't it chief. Blurry lines? More like a blurry mess.
What is gods name are those renders.
abyssmal is what it is. Not to mention you're telling me its almost 1gb despite only having like what 30 renders?

It doesn't even play right. This whole thing feels like a botched attempt at a VN

There's nothing excessively bad about this game. But nothing good enough to redeem the bad parts.

Renders arent great. At least in the version I have, there's a lot of noisy scenes.

Models are decent enough - it seems like they started off trying to keep them varied but unfortunately wasted the effort by then forcing your character into constantly saying how the large unattractive boobs are amazing. Most characters are misshapen caricatures.

MC isn't bad. he isn't a complete coward and looks pretty normal sometimes, but the dev loves closups of him pulling utterly stupid faces and shaking the text. Player has crap all control as the mc has constant 'thought' narrative which decides everything

The women suffer from the all-too-common empty heads trope in vn's. All the think about is dick and dont have nay reasoning behind any of their actions. They all throw themselves at mc even in this preview

We keep having sex dreams and flashbacks which is just annoying.

The way the player is guided through setting names along with relationships is decent

Very good start to what looks to be an standard "family" story (peeking, shower, see-thru etc ) but engaging game. The graphics are decent but there is an issue with some of the skin color (seems pixilated or freckles that disappear in next image), some animation (good job on that) and the character models are all quite nice.

It is a good introduction but background story needs a little bit of work.

Overall, giving it 5 stars because this is obviously a project that is being taken seriously by the dev and he clearly has a story to tell with hopefully some interesting aspects to the standard setup added in the future. Excellent start to your first game and good luck in the future. look forward to updates! v/r Diego