VN - Ren'Py - BNWO [v0.2] [Knox_xx]

VERSION: v0.2
SUMMARY: Meh, another BBC cuck story...Yawn
RATINGS: (out of 5): ⭐

NOTE: The following categories and scoring method are my own criteria and may require more context. Additionally, scoring is based on the state, and what is in the current version and not what may or may not be introduced at a later point.

1. Character (Model) Visuals......... : ⭐⭐⭐
2. General (World) Visuals........... : ⭐⭐
3. Animation Quality................. : ⭐
4. Character Personality(Persona).... : ⭐
5. Story & Dialogue.................. : ⭐
6. Writing & Grammar................. : ⭐⭐
7. UX/UI, Game Type & Mechanics.......: ⭐⭐
8. Playtime & Pacing..................: ⭐
9. Music & Sounds.....................: ⭐
10. Adult Content & Fetishes.......... : ⭐⭐

Average: X of 50 possible points giving a X% rating i.e. X stars.

PROS: - See my opinions section for details.

1. Models are attractive and good looking.
2. Writing is structured and reads well enough, but can do with revision.

CONS: - See my opinions section for details.

1. Grainy low quality renders
2. UX/UX, the dev even says press H...can't we just get the opacity and font change setting please!
3. No sounds/audio of any kind!
4. Poor dialogue and sentence structure. Narrated dialogue can use an identifier also...
5. Daughter is a clone of the mother, not very original when it comes to design...
6. No animations of any kind
7. All lewds are either dreams or snaps of someone watch porn
8. Almost zero playtime, there is really very little here and what is here is kinetic, which makes it being so short even worse...

OPINIONS, SUGGESTIONS & FINAL REMARKS:

NOTE: The following remarks are my personal opinions and thoughts, which may provide more context and could be useful to the developer. (Read them or don't)

• Obvious and blatant in its design and purpose to have all the white woman fawn over the ALPHA BBC. All the white guys get cucked and the MC and his dad (basically every white guy) are cucks.
• Not sure whats going on with the glossy skin on the characters like Hannah, she looks oiled up like some supermodels...its just unnatural.
• The entire dialogue Marcus has at dinner is like a sale pitch or justification of how black men will take white woman from their white men, like its the natural thing to do, the alpha will always be the "top dog" that kind of mentality, again pointing to how obvious and boring the plot is.
• All events are built around some big black dude dominating the room, deliberately casting a negative light on the white males and all the white woman inevitable fawn over these black men.

TLDR:

Looks ok, models look decent, textures and renders are low quality, lacks any sounds, any meaningful or interesting story of any kind. If you love the whole BBC dominating and stealing white woman off their "Beta" partners then this is for you.

Black bull. The most overused kink on the site next to NTR. The entire game is based around the thought that white women will just instantly go along with anything just to get donged out by a couple of black dudes. I don't know who's fetish is black dudes fucking everyone you know, but here we are. Normally I'd knock a star off if the rest of the rest of the game had any merit.......it does not. Its a porn premise with a porn set up.

I could understand the demo, which would have offered few situations, but this second release is even worse, if the pace is this, there is no technical improvement, the graphics still show 2019 renderings, with comical audio, the story, not the commentary, in fact just one sentence, an ode to the BBC with NTR. It's enough to understand the plot.

First version... not alot here yet, but the setups are pretty good. The dialogue is expressive and gets across the character's intent without actually stating it (which is good writing). Overall looks to be a great start to a great game, we'll see what happens.

Prologue/ demo version reviewed

Very short, ho hum demo about a wealthy black businessman and his son who go to a dinner party at the home of a white family to discuss a potential business partnership.

It's obvious from the start that this will quickly escalate into a NTR/MILF/ BBC style affair, which is fine. Unfortunately the demo doesn't really impress due to a number of issues..


Pros:

1- Decent looking characters.

2- The renders were adequate if uninspiring.

3- If you like Milfs, blonde bimbos and BBC this might appeal to you.

4- The black father's dialogue was well written. Much better than the rest of the games characters. Very odd.

Cons:

1- You can change the MC's name at the start but his default name still pops up during dialogue. Sloppy. This is so easy to fix.

2- Some odd errors where one character is speaking and you see a different character on screen who is not even in the scene.

3- Very inconsistent writing with mediocre dialogue. There are also numerous grammatical errors. It needs a serious poof reading.

4- A white dialogue box with black text (ugh!) and there is no option to reduce the opacity. So a large portion of the render is pretty much blocked out. It even says on every single render "press H to remove dialogue box". Why not just use a black text box with the option to reduce the opacity?

5- Nothing much happens in this demo, which then asks you to purchase the game at the conclusion.

*Boner Meter- Semi Hard

Average looking game with very inconsistent dialogue that is filled with grammatical errors. I suppose it may appeal to fans of NTR and BBC who will most likely overlook all of the flaws because they are too busy fapping. Hey, I fap too, but I also like quality dialogue!

I honestly don't see enough quality here to warrant interest, but it's still early in development. If the errors are fixed and the grammar cleaned up it may develop into something worthwhile.

Good luck to the dev.
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* Boner Meter-

1 star - Flaccid - Poor in many areas.
2-stars - Semi hard - Some redeeming qualities but lacking in many areas.
3 stars - Average - A serviceable game that should appeal to it's targeted audience.
4 stars - Fully erect - A really good game that excels in most areas.
5 stars - Pornstar Cock - A stellar game that excels technically, visually and in the storytelling.

Listen, the title itself will already be enough to let you know if the game is for you or not.

Hate interracial? Hate NTR? Game is simply not for you or even targeting you.There are thousands of other games to go look at and many of those thousands will probably fit the tags you enjoy.

BUT. If you are the type that believes viewing interracial sex is like looking at modern art. If you are the type of person who is mesmerized by BBC itself. If seeing a women branding a spade tattoo makes you squirm and go dizzy. And if you are the type of person who worships and wishes to see all women getting the ethereal pleasure given through sex with BBC and transforming into snowbunnies for black men, than this game is for you.

It's NTR. It's Interracial. Its a story of reverence towards the relationship between bbcs and snowbunnies. It's for those who truly believe that there is nothing better than being locked up and plapping your balls away to the beauty that is BBC interracial sex. If you are among those individuals, than this kinetic novel hits all the right notes.

Its a tale about the BNWO at work.

CONTEXT:
At the time of this writing (26-01-06) this is a demo.
I don't mean 'in-progress' / first view.
I mean at the end of the first day it ends on a screen that says 'this was a demo, go to the Steam store to buy the game', and both the steam page images and these show that there is already more content that is just not being shown (so it is intentionally just a 'try and then buy for $15' model)

So evaluating it as a preview of 'should I spend $15 on this game, which I am seeing on a site with dozens of games in this genre that I can play for free and then support the creators that I really like as a thank-you)

GOOD:
* the art is hot. Not 'blow your mind away' with advanced lighting and post-effects, but good, unique looks on characters, some care taken with the layout

* the premise is straightforward - if these are your kinks it will do what it says on the tin, if they're not then the title should've told you to move on

CHALLENGES:
* the DEMO is short. Barely a few minutes, nothing sexy happens aside from one image in a dream sequence and one image of someone playing with themselves looking at porn. As a DEMO I have no idea if the sex scenes / writing will be any good or make sense

* the writing is ok. Nothing terrible, only a few grammar issues, some filler text that could've been skipped or rewritten to drive plot, but not bad. Also nothing there to hook me and make me go 'oh yes, I Have to know what happens next' or to titillate me 'oh that is so Hot!'

* nothing happens. As a DEMO that's trying to tell me to spend $15 to find out what happens next.... this is a BNWO game that's going to have BNWO content, and the demo says that. That's it.

So... I can't speak to if anyone should spend $15 for this. I can say there is probably not much point trying out the DEMO, you can basically tell everything about this by just reading the title of the game and clicking through the screenshots in the preview, actually downloading is not going to really change anything in your life or make you any happier

Review after the prolog
it was decent set
the premise(obvious)
the heroes of the story shown and we can see the diffrence betwen the female characters inot only in looks
art is good(you can crealy see diffrent colors of the eyes of the characters)
redhead is alwase a plus
1 proper scene would be nice
i would give 4 stars but some dude give 1 just becasue of the premise so im
giving 5 to even the score

Finally! Dev, this game is amazing. Amazing! I hope there will be more BNWO themed games this year. I hope there will be more developers like you.
Snowbunnies are very hot. I'm waiting for the SPH fetish.
I recommend the game and look forward to an early update.

Although this is a very short demo, but the character art is amazing (similar art to creator older title Stellar Inc) it's just beautiful.
The plot seems to be focused already and I enjoy the hits of everyone role and hierarchy. Wish this game would have choices and go deeper into the story not just like things have to happen, would like a plot, some character build up.
I wish the creator best of luck.