This is a pretty solid first look for a game. The premise isn't the most unique, several similar games being developed, but the setting is different with a more fantasy style, some characters being elves, minotaurs, and orcs.
One thing I always look at in a first release is grammar/spelling, and I'm happy with what I see here. Some unnecessary commas but every sentence has punctuation at the end, and no noticeable misspellings.
I don't analyze every image super in depth but I didn't notice any egregious AI oversights, everything looked fine to me. Overall I'm definitely excited to see the next update, I find all the female characters really attractive and the genre is something I'm interested in. I'll keep an eye on this game's development, and after some more content has been added might rerate it to be higher.