VN - Ren'Py - Breaking Becky [0.2.9] [TKW]

Let's get this out of the way first: the protagonist here is sort of a butterface, albeit one with a pretty hot MILF body. Honestly I don't even think her face is that busted, it just needs a few tweaks and it'll be fine. I think the dev deserves some props for making a character with a unique face in the sea of hyper-bimbo plastic surgery faces that most games with realistic 3D models seem to have. He definitely has skills when it comes to 3D modeling because the other characters are both attractive and fairly unique looking for the most part.
At the time of my playthrough, there's not much of a big storyline going on. We just kind of follow Becky and pick naughty option or boring option. In my opinion most of the decisions aren't really compelling because it's hard to care about Becky or any of the other characters involved. I think this game could have used a more focused angle with Becky by focusing on a goal or profession and base the rest of the story around that. Maybe start out with a more fixed background and then have the rest of the decisions in the game based on that.
Anyways, I'm giving this 3 stars but the game could definitely be 4 with some improvements to the story and characters.

Pretty standard failed attempt at making a game with lots of choices that don’t actually impact the story or gameplay in any meaningful way.
The sex scenes feel completely soulless—no real setup, barely any description, just a few images, and that’s it. Feels like they just checked a box and moved on.
The game doesn’t really have anything to say. The art is decent, but at no point do you feel like you’re actually playing an adult game.
Lots of content, but it’s all meaningless.

Animations are good, story is not bad. What I really love is that she is being forced into sex but you have to be submissive enough for it. So it is by choice but also not.
There are only two critics I have:
- Animations are not in a loop.
-She is uhm, ugly. I wish she were a young naïve woman

The renders might require some more work, but they may work for some too. The story and it's pacing is decent enough for a first start. What I like is the self-corruption aspect of this game -- whether into depravity or addiction, Becky allows herself to fall and fall hard.

This game is fairly good if you can look past the initial FMC aesthetics (it does get better later in game). The pace of corruption is better than average although it may be helpful to add more minute decisions to the game which help shape the FMC's submissivenes/slutiness/faithfulness.

Minor suggestion: some scenes can be really dark (lighting wise) and obscures the otherwise splendid art. Please consider brightening the renders if possible.

I am definitely watchlisting this and coming back when there is more content. Good luck Dev!

Really liking the game so far, so rare nowadays some "intelligence" bar in the games. Story wise is good, enough to be good and don't drag scenes after some centuries of plot that you must likely will not be that into (like some games who have 2 "silmarillion" of words but 4 scenes of content to after 3 months be abandoned). Decision wise I think should be a little more clear how much you get or when popup some decision, it shows how much were left for you to get to choose that but well, some people like this flavour. And I'm LOVING her design and the rest of the characters. Can't wait for more. Keep up \o

I rather like the direction this is going. I'm willing to give it a chance. The language issues aren't insurmountable. I like corruption games, this one's off to a good start, and I like that I can make her become a drunk as well.

In agreement with the reviewer below, in particular the part that begins with "Decisions are not clear to lead your character in one direction." and then proceeds to discuss them having to use console to find scenes.

Renders are generic and while not 'bad' aren't really 'good' either (and definitely not 2+ gig size worthy), so the selling point to a game like this would be the fets. However the game is no where near fun enough to play, or the story interesting enough, to play guessing games to find the scenes with the fets you want (or apparently, to replay each update to find what new was added).

2 of 5 as it is now, maybe with room to improve if it added a clear WT or a gallery or something or was a more appropriate file size for it's quality.

It's not bad as a start, but there are several aspects that should be improved:
- Some renders are terrible. It looks like it wouldn't have let the rendering finish.
- Decisions are not clear to lead your character in one direction. I have had to modify the variables to get the blowjob scene. I had chosen all the options where the MC is submissive, but the sub variable was set to 5. By the way, don't disable the console. It's very easy to activate, and it's okay if someone wants to tinker around a bit.

Do I recommend the game at this point? Not really. It has very little content, and some bugs. I'm going to give it 3 stars because I don't want to damage the start too much. I think the game has potential, but it still needs to be polished a lot.

Maybe I was spoiled by good v0.1 games recently, but this is pretty bad. Some of my issues with this release:
- MC looks 30 years old, yet the game portrays her as much younger (nothing against older MC, just make her image consistent with description)
- ugly bastards are not only ugly here, but also disgusting (more than usual)
- english is pretty broken
- writing is not good
- there is no content
- choices doesn't matter, literally no difference no matter what you pick

Instead of downloading this game at v0.1 just check screens in the OP, they contain everything that you can see in the game.
The only good thing about this whole game so far is the MC figure.