VN - Ren'Py - Completed - Breed [v0.5.1] [Gasmaskguy]

Jeez you guys need to chill with the 4 and 5 stars reviews.
Here's everything that put me off.

- Absolutely zero buildup and sexual tension. It goes from 0 to 100 in seconds, like from 0 vaginal sex to calling the goblin "master" after the first thrust out of nowhere, all that within a couple of frames. Not exactly worthy of having the corruption tag imho. And this is my biggest issue with this game, it reads like a 10 page comic, very short and straightforward.

- Some words, mainly the focus point of the story are CAPITALIZED, it makes for a really weird intonation while reading and suddenly CUM out of nowhere and do you want some INFERTILITY too. You get the idea. If you want to put emphasis on some words, go for bold text maybe.

- Awkward English, it's pretty evident English isn't the dev's first language.

- Clothing looks out of place, like the dev felt like playing a game of Dress To Impress ™ with random assets. Stuff like vinyl, latex clothing, etc. As if this world had a full-fledged petroleum industry going on.

- Poorly chosen fluid assets. "Jennifer is wet, lemme look for pressure washer effects real quick".

- Text / image synchronization is poor, a lot of times you see things before they actually happen, 3 dialogue textboxes later. For example, Jennifer saying "now undress" when the goblin has been naked for a while.

- The AI voiceover, oh god. I had to turn it off, it conveys 0 emotions, the text is read in the most monotone voice possible it's actually a turn off.

Don't get me wrong, in the context of a first game it's really not that bad, I would even say it's a good start, making good 3D renders takes a lot of effort. But there's room for improvement.

Solid game, focused, decent renders, and an VO for the lady. Focused, more manageable games are something the forum could use more of.

and the thing wants me to send more than 200 characters, when my entire review is about how tight the scope is and how competantly it's executed. I bet the f95 would love for this game to have 20 different 300mb screenshots of the same scene, just with the woman turned slightly to the right each time, what a joke.

The female cast is great, everyone who had crush on Yennefer in some part of his life will have good time. AI voice of Yen is good and his "no emioton" tone fits pervectly to Yen and servant situation. The story is short and juicy, and there is room for our 200iq decisions here. Overall i would bang Yen again 5/5.

hot, for everyone who likes yennifer even hotter.

corruption is a bit too fast, but hell, its a finished games, has multiple branches and actually choices matter and might even change with what clothes on yen greets you in the morning.

5 stars from me: hot corruption even if a bit too fast, I like the mind control aspect and goblin vs female always great.

Would have loved it more with more "realistic" body parts, including too big dicks, to vulptious yen. If goblin dick would have been more normal sizes, not that weird pattern on it and yennifer more "petite" it would have been perfect

I enjoyed the game and loved the scenes and gameplay. I would have given it five stars if it had animations. Adding animations would have elevated the game to the next level. I highly recommend others to play. Great job, developers! Keep up the good work.

Writing: 6/10
Imagery: 8/10
Gameplay: 6/10
Kinks: 7/10
Overall: 7/10

A goblin game that actually finished? Shocking.

The story might be silly nonsense, I mean, Yennefer with a goblin servant? Ok sure. Next you'll tell me Triss has a Sylvan slave. Of course being silly the idea goes about as you'd expect, with the goblin being a master mind corruptor, and "Jennifer" being a bimbo slut who is fucking anyone she thinks can get her pregnant.

Choices are pretty few and in-between, but they do result in different results. You'll either get a more corrupt Jennifer, or not. You'll get a sex scene, or not. Towards the end your choices will open up a couple options. You can either turn her into your personal slutty witch wife, or send her to the goblin den to become a cum dump broodmother. Or if you're really bad, she becomes a freeway for gangbangs and anyone else looking to pump a load into her holes around town.

This is a pretty fast "game" but I liked the sexier version of Yen, the model was excellent, good for a fap.

Model is top notch. The setting is secondary, but still entertaining. Yennefer is a good pick for this part. I would love to have a gallery of pictures of her. Not a big fan of the multiple paths style, I prefer illusion of choice, because finding the missing ones is a bit of a drag.

Solid game. It has a couple of pretty good different endings, but it definitely left me wanting more. The models used in game are quality tho. It uses an AI voiceover for some of Yen's lines, its not so offensive or anything but if that is not your thing I'll mute it.

So yeah, play it if you like corruption games and goblin games that aren't too cringe or unfinished.

Wonderful game, loads of sexy shots of Yennefer.
Sadly they aren't animations
I would recommend the walkthrough script if you want the best ending.
But definitely just try around and get different game overs

Honestly, for a first game, it's impressively well-done. The graphics and rendering are simply outstanding. The story is straightforward: you play as a goblin tasked with corrupting your mistress, and that's about it. The decisions you make in the game and their consequences are sometimes not entirely clear, but you can quickly see the outcomes of your choices, which I personally find very engaging. The rest of the game delivers exactly what it promises. The only aspect I didn't particularly enjoy, if you can call it that, are the voices. I ended up turning them off.

You play as a goblin, captured and used as a housemaid for a Sorceress named Jennifer. Choose the right choices to corrupt her and make her yours to breed her.

Content: ⭐⭐⭐⭐
Graphics: ⭐⭐⭐
Script: ⭐⭐⭐
Characters: ⭐⭐⭐
Enjoyment:⭐⭐⭐⭐

Final note: ⭐⭐⭐⭐

Breed shines as a fast and direct game. If it were any longer it would tarnish the experience, but as it is, it's good entertainment.

A fine addition to the corruption by goblin genre. I wasn't a fan of the voice work using some bot and the character of Jennifer was too cold till the end. The black guy comes out of nowhere but is there as an obstacle, along with excess use of powers and your own goblin tribe. Including the early bad ends, there are 6 endings which is a good amount for a small and straightforward game such as this. Overall, a fun 40 minute playthrough.

v0.5
Ehhhh... I think this game is more a testiment to how under-served the impregnation kink is on this website than anything. Mf'ers are desperate for it. Me included. However, while I love to see another game catering to this kink, I can't overlook the rest of the qualities of the game.

This is, objectively, not an excellent (5 stars) or good (4 stars) game. I think this is a weakness of our rating system, I have to compare low-effort titles like this with the likes of S.H.E.L.T.E.R. or Lab Rats 2. This game can't hold a candle to anything I would call 5 stars.

To be brief, the writing is poor (sloppy, weird wording sometimes, very shallow), the game is 100% still images, the choices aren't ways for you to tailor the game to your liking as much as they are opportunities for you to get a bad experience if you guess wrong, and it's quite short. It's a visual novel, so there is no gameplay to speak of. Writing is among the most important things for a visual novel, and since writing in this one is relatively poor, it weighs quite heavily on it.

However, on the other side, the renders are wonderful, and many of Yen's lines are voiced (presumably by an AI tool which sounds "mostly fine")... And, outside of talking to kinks, that's really it. Given all that, this game probably deserves 2 stars, however it was enough to get me off and so I'll give it 3. That's mostly because I'm very into corruption/impregnation kinks. If you are too, this one might be worth a play. If you're just somewhat interested, or not at all, stay away.

Also, regarding NTR ...
PREFACE: I am not taking anything below into account of my scoring/review. I am just sharing for fellow players who may want to know before they play. If anything, this section will prevent the game from receiving negative reviews from players surprised at the content.

There's not a lot of content yet, but the renders look good and while I personally dislike NTR, in this case it happens only when you end up in a bad ending.

Overall I'll definitely wait for the next updates and I'd love to see some physical alterations (such as piercings, bigger body parts and so on) based on the corruption level.

While its not a game worth 5 stars, I think it could become one, especially since it doesn't waste your time, and the overall quality is quite good.

Really good game, good scenarios, hot well-modeled characters, the scenes were just perfect and the multiple endings gave the players all the possibilities. Even there's a incredible deepthroat scene a just found. Loving game 10/10 u.u

Game is pretty good. I seen not many witcher parodies on the internet, and its rare example of good one. The game has a lot of alternative paths, so its very entertaining. Would like to see what it become in future. Good luck!

The game is in earlier stages, thus the 4 stars, but for what i can say is that i believe this game will be good, the dev listens to the feedback of people, the models are hot, and this is a corruption game with something that imo all corruption games should have, Body modifications, in this case the dev said that the girl body will become lewder as the corruption progress, thicker body and bigger tits and ass, this got me really hung for the game

the game has ntr, but even for that the dev listened to people opinions and is tweaking how it works

as i said we're in the earlier stages of the game, but as for the potential, it can go far, imo let make a prediction here, this is the first game of this dev, where he tests things and it'll serve like a foundation for a next big one

Amazing game to fap to. Decisions actually matter for progressing the story. Also, a good bit of variance between scenes based on your decisions. The model is 11/10, and only gets better every update. Nice mix of fetishes, mostly focuses on corruption/mind control, with a little bit of NTR as bad endings. Also strangely enough I enjoy the AI voice over, it actually fits pretty well

TL;DR - Great game to fap too if you're into corruption/mind control with actual physical/mental changes.

Well it has been good. At the moment there is little content (obviously), but Yennefer's model is quite sexy and each decision is important to a certain extent. We still cannot impregnate and subdue our beloved sorceress, in fact in version 0.2 not only do we not rape her or have sex with her, we don't even touch her (although there are quite a few sexual scenes for the short duration of the game). And little more, I have a predilection for goblin games and this is no exception, I would give it a 3 but the 4 will help raise an average that is low due to little content, something that personally seems a little unfair to me. I hope the game is not abandoned and if another sorceress appears in the future I would be more than grateful.

Not bad but far from good

Pros:

1. Yennifer has always been beautiful, here she is just extra slutty and looks very closely like the original, even has the same attitude
2. Model is very nice
3. Written well enough and structured well so the story if you can call it that is simple yet done well.

Cons:

1. Too short, there is little to no content, all that is there would make for 10min of gameplay and IMO should have been the first release giving the player at least some action.
2. As it is, the goblin (MC) does not get lucky at all in any way with Yen, even the naughty things you can get up to in the background are pretty simple and nothing noteworthy.
3. The goblin looks actually completely silly, the model is dated and his junk looks like a prop for a circus act...erm...why??

Overall the game is so basic, has so little content and clearly there does not go much effort into the development compared to other games out there. The idea is solid, but execution lacks the effort that could have made this a very good game, even if its ultimately very short. Pity...