Ren'Py - Breeding Visa [Demo] [JellyFluff Games]

the most boring click grind fest .... there is no real skill in writing on this level you click for three set areas and to be honest there needs more variation in scene even in a click grind to hold attention i cant give this more then 1 star at level its at it shouldnt even have been released i lost count of the click click click and not wasting anymore time on it at all

#1 needs more filling out of scenes not a singles static screen for gym or tea house or the store turn after turn after turn

#2 the option either sugary sweet complacent or plain flat out rude make no sense of its one ofr the other no tactful interaction

#3 seeing as how the scenes are very little variation in use there is no need to even rate graphics its plain boring unfulfilling at best

#4 add some garnishing show his increase in stats give some basics of what is needed to some extent to progress , and if route is finished on one of the 4 girls then say end of conetn for so and so and yes counting the very first one met in office as one of those 4 girls but as far as i have gone she has had not further interactions

bottom line fill out grphics better give some scene variation, add a few more scenes like for where he is staying. be a little more creative in your writing you need the content of box graphics and of dialog to hook peoples attention this just doesnt have either in my opinion. and for a 700mb file size download to be honest there is zero content to justify for size

Even though it's only the initial demo, I had a great time playing and laughing.

I was expecting much less content, but you actually get to "homebase" with one of the love interests. Surprisingly the writing is what kept me playing and I'm usually character design/renders 1st kind a guy. The comedy is right up my alley, the main protag can be a little crude, but his timing is hilarious, the girl Rin also plays the innocent aggressive type well, and without spoiling too much the mother even though we don't meet her, is already a riot with how she influences their relationship.

The main protag looks great, wait till you see his abs. But I'm guessing this game would appeal to those whom have yellow fever . The girls look realistic, their bodies proportionate, beautifully designed and uniquely different to each other. The girl Rin has an amazing body and the scenes/animation with her are done well especially with momentary expressions during dialog that gives it natural flow. Also, the dialog during the sex scenes really add to the spice.

The potential is there, I hope you keep the effort and creativity going. Looking forward to the next update.

This game should not have released in this state. Admittedly its a demo, but in that case the author should have just released it as a taster focusing entirely on the scenes he had created rather than this unremitting grindfest. Despite the 1 star rating i will actually be keeping an eye on this one because the central conceit is appealing and the models are pretty good. But this demo is just the worst. you click through the same three periods in a day with nothing happening about 15 times then you get a short little teaser of a interaction where the gym girl talks down to you and then its back to clicking through the same three things again 20 times to get another little taste. This could actually have potential if it was switched to a VN format. Yea it would probably make the game 5-10 minutes but id much prefer a 10 minute enjoyable experience to an hour of clicking simulator.

generally I dont mind grind, that's why I like sandboxes, but the grind in this one is so annoyingly unrewarding and repetitive.

You repeat the same 3 activities every day until it decides youve done it enough.

MC is a pathetic sadsack, the game tries to present him as a ladies man but it quickly becomes clear why they would need to resort on a rape visa in asia to see nudity - he seems to have been written by a reddit type, he cant talk to women like humans and uses the word cunt all the time

The female models are pretty good and fairly well rendered. not super high praise I know, but realism in renders has spoiled us

review on DEMO:
So far, it's not recommended to play.
YES, it might be unfair to rate a new game with 1 star, but honestly that's what you get so far. I will change the review in future once things have changed.
REASON:
The graphics are pretty standard, nothing outstanding (maybe 2-3 stars)
The SANDBOX MODE makes want to give negative 5 stars to be honest. So far, the sandbox mode includes the following:
- train strength to get +1
- repeat that 5 times (5 days, as you can only train once a day)
- get a short non-sex scene with RIN
- train again for strength +1
- repeat that 5 times (5 days, as you can only train once a day)
- get a short non-sex scene with RIN
...
repeat all that again until you get the 3rd non-sex scene with RIN
...
- having 15 trainings of strength (15 str points), you get another scene with RIN, where you agree to swim race against her - you lose.
- start training endurance for +1 the next day
- repeat training endurance until you get 5 endurance
- get another NON SEX scene with RIN
- repeat t training endurance until you get 10 endurance
- get another NON SEX scene with RIN
.....
and so on
....
after endless times rinse and repeat, you finally get a short sex scene

TL/DR:
PERFECT example why people hate sandbox games, especially such badly done like this one.
Basically you do half an hour nothing else than sleep, train, sleep, train, etc... until you then get a simple short sex scene. There's not even some changes in the scenes - all repetitive scenes are 1:1 the same - same dialogue, same renders, same everything.
This sandbox mode serves only for the purpose to upset the player and bore them to death - Bad gameplay, worse balancing - EXTREMELY repetitive and boring.

EDIT:
NO - you don't experience ANY of building up sexual tension. All dialogues are cold, written without "soul", and simply blunt 1-2 liners of text.
/edit

As this is only a demo, i just hope, the main game will handle this things otherwise, because of the premise, this could be a good game, even storywise.

But those who know me, also know that i never rate a game for what it COULD be, but for what it is right now. And, sorry to say that, for now it's nothing else than a boring click feast (more a click horror show). I think there's no need to honey-cover the dev ... being honest and telling him exactly why this game (imho) will not work this way in early state might help him to change things for the better - before it's too late.

Review based on demo.

The premise of the story isn't awful. Japans culture has shifted to a point where men and woman no longer feel the urge to procreate, hence the countries population is plummeting at an alarming rate. In an effort to remedy this, the government offers Visa's to foreigners if they can successfully entice woman and men to want to have sex again.

Sounds pretty good so far, right?

Unfortunately, the game is a head banging grind fest. I can't tell you how many times I had to click through redundant screens just to get a new dialogue to unlock. This relentless grind made it simply not worth the effort, unless you're a masochist.

Pros:

1- Gorgeous characters. The woman are stunning and will be the sole reason why people will even bother playing. I admit that it was the only reason why I played.

2- The actual premise of the story, although a bit farfetched, is not bad.

Cons:

1- An awful grind fest. It's actually painful.

2- Inconsistent writing.

3- The majority of the female characters are very unlikeable making you wonder why the MC would even bother with them, which further highlights the shortfalls of the writing.

It should have played out like this-

MC - "Hi"
Bitch- "Fuck off, foreigner"
MC- "Woah, get laid much? ... I'm outta here!"

Instead, the MC sticks around and you're once again clicking on buttons in an attempt to see the bitch get naked.

4- It's a sandbox. Kinda like edging, but without the constant pleasure.

Final thoughts-

Scrap the sandbox and write a normal story. The premise and the impressive character models are already a good starting point.

I can't see why anyone in their right mind would want to click on endless buttons just to get to fuck a hot 3D Asian girl. With that said, I'm sure some people will enjoy the torture.

The dev has some talent, but in my opinion, he/she should re-evaluate the direction this game is going in.