The VN has good renders and honestly good pacing which is a problem a lot of visual novels don't address but beyond that its just bad writing all the way down. Characters are extremely boring and simple, acting impulsively and irrationally, if this had been explained in the plot that'd be more forgivable but some of these motherfuckers are out here having screaming matches every other scene and they're supposed to be actual adults. Idk just seems like a lot. Still the pacing is genuinely good, with scenes keeping a brisk momentum and you're never really greeted by walls of unnecessary text which is nice. A lot of VNs just have characters spew dialogue at you that's either uninteresting, poorly written, or completely unnecessary and for the most part this game doesn't do that even if the writing itself isn't great, at least there's not much of it yknow. Only reason this gets average instead of poor is because of the production value though which I was actually surprised with, there's music, interesting scenes, even some bordering on creepy, audio stings, etc. Its clear the author put in work here and if they could improve their writing abilities or include a writer in their next project I think they could actually make some nice stories.