So I just finished v0.1 and gotta say, I loved it. The game has a lot of potential, just need to iron some things out first.
The renders are crystal clear and high quality (some clipping issues here and there, but nothing to worry about). The girls are all beautiful in their own way, a lot of diversity in terms of looks and personality, so it doesn't feel monotonous.
The story is still in its infancy, so not much to say about it other than it's already way more creative than much of the other works on this site. I'm not gonna stop too much on the Grace situation as I didn't really mind it, but I understand where the criticism is coming from (it might give out some NTR vibes even if it's not really NTR, weirdly enough).
Now, about the writing, it's actually not bad. From what I've seen, grammatical mistakes are almost nonexistent, so no "engrish" (thank god). I didn't mind the use of different languages in the dialogue, I think it gives identity to the characters and I also find it original. The problem is the excessive amount of redundancy in the writing, especially in the inner monologues. It's a little too much. You could trim a lot of the lines and still get the same point across. Sometimes the lines just tell us things we already see in the renders, so it's useless, it feels like filler. But then again, I didn't really have a bad time reading throughout all of it, so I don't think it's as bad as some people say. You can tell the writer is somewhat new to the VN space, so I think giving him/her some leniency is fair.
All in all, I had a pleasant experience with this one and I would recommend it to everyone. Thank you devs for sharing your work and good luck on your future endeavors.
The renders are crystal clear and high quality (some clipping issues here and there, but nothing to worry about). The girls are all beautiful in their own way, a lot of diversity in terms of looks and personality, so it doesn't feel monotonous.
The story is still in its infancy, so not much to say about it other than it's already way more creative than much of the other works on this site. I'm not gonna stop too much on the Grace situation as I didn't really mind it, but I understand where the criticism is coming from (it might give out some NTR vibes even if it's not really NTR, weirdly enough).
Now, about the writing, it's actually not bad. From what I've seen, grammatical mistakes are almost nonexistent, so no "engrish" (thank god). I didn't mind the use of different languages in the dialogue, I think it gives identity to the characters and I also find it original. The problem is the excessive amount of redundancy in the writing, especially in the inner monologues. It's a little too much. You could trim a lot of the lines and still get the same point across. Sometimes the lines just tell us things we already see in the renders, so it's useless, it feels like filler. But then again, I didn't really have a bad time reading throughout all of it, so I don't think it's as bad as some people say. You can tell the writer is somewhat new to the VN space, so I think giving him/her some leniency is fair.
All in all, I had a pleasant experience with this one and I would recommend it to everyone. Thank you devs for sharing your work and good luck on your future endeavors.