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steelsmiter

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I really liked this as well. The only thing that bugged me was that blue gem that changed her. Not sure if it mind control through magic or a drug
The dialogue on the phone call literally refers to it as a spell, but since the English is choppy and weird that could be
1) The real intent
2) Mistranslation
3) Misdirection
4) Retconned later
 

King Monkey Mon

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Don't jump to conclusions just yet. Yes, what happened at the end of the prologue was the blue sapphire's effects, but that doesn't mean that later on the relationship with her (and with others) won't build up romantically and on their own, that remains to be seen. But I'm sure there's a reason why the blue sapphire was necessary in the plot, why it was necessary for them to have sex right now.
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despite this game doesnt have and animation im quite enjoying it after all the renders are really good it has music and and it has top tier milfs

edit : oh wait nevermind it has animations :p
 

Lorric17

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Don't jump to conclusions just yet. Yes, what happened at the end of the prologue was the blue sapphire's effects, but that doesn't mean that later on the relationship with her (and with others) won't build up romantically and on their own, that remains to be seen. But I'm sure there's a reason why the blue sapphire was necessary in the plot, why it was necessary for them to have sex right now.
I agree with most of that, except that generally tags are for current content. Can we agree that romance went out the window when she was spellbound to fuck him? Even if the spell worked better than they intended.

The dialogue on the phone call literally refers to it as a spell, but since the English is choppy and weird that could be
1) The real intent
2) Mistranslation
3) Misdirection
4) Retconned later
Missed that, thanks.
 
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I agree with most of that, except that generally tags are for current content. Can we agree that romance went out the window when she was spellbound to fuck him? Even if the spell worked better than they intended.


Missed that, thanks.
Well, most of their conversation was romantic ish, sapphire had nothing to do with that and actually if you think about, the effects triggered when she started feeling a certain type of way, MC was complimenting her, wanting to do things for her, make her happy and so forth, and in her mind she was taken by it, thinking how amazing he is, how she's been lonely and whatnot when an amazing man has been right there in front of her all along, and just then the sapphires effects kicked in.
So she was starting to feel romantic things, and sapphire then kicked in the lustful desires :p
 

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I didn't pick up on a romance vibe from either really, although I got the vibe the boy would go any extra mile for mommy with a bit of nudging.
 

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I didn't pick up on a romance vibe from either really, although I got the vibe the boy would go any extra mile for mommy with a bit of nudging.
Doesn't take any nudge, he'd do anything for her already, but so would she for him pretty much :p
Romance isn't always fluffy bunnies and flowers and boxes of chocolate, sometimes it's simply the things they say or how one feels about the things that's being said and so forth :p
 

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Well, most of their conversation was romantic ish, sapphire had nothing to do with that and actually if you think about, the effects triggered when she started feeling a certain type of way, MC was complimenting her, wanting to do things for her, make her happy and so forth, and in her mind she was taken by it, thinking how amazing he is, how she's been lonely and whatnot when an amazing man has been right there in front of her all along, and just then the sapphires effects kicked in.
So she was starting to feel romantic things, and sapphire then kicked in the lustful desires :p
Again, you're right, except that without the gem, nothing would have come of it. If the gem did nothing then why was it in the story, huh? Got you now :evilgrin: Well, maybe not, it could just be there to introduce the baddies. The baddies that are bad because they experiment with mind controlling spells! And those are bad!

Ok, I feel my pulse going up to unsafe levels. Let's agree to play it when the next update is out :)
 

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Doesn't take any nudge, he'd do anything for her already, but so would she for him pretty much :p
Romance isn't always fluffy bunnies and flowers and boxes of chocolate, sometimes it's simply the things they say or how one feels about the things that's being said and so forth :p
I know what you're saying, I just didn't see it that way until they were on the couch. I think he needed a nudge to 'go there' and mom will always provide, this we know. :D
 
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Again, you're right, except that without the gem, nothing would have come of it. If the gem did nothing then why was it in the story, huh? Got you now :evilgrin: Well, maybe not, it could just be there to introduce the baddies. The baddies that are bad because they experiment with mind controlling spells! And those are bad!

Ok, I feel my pulse going up to unsafe levels. Let's agree to play it when the next update is out :)
Well it's kind of obvious, the sapphire lowered, or rather just took away her inhibitions as well as increased her libido; no inhibitions, no reservations, feeling horny, a young dude sitting next to you adoring the panties off of you pretty much, what do you do? You fuck him :p But one of the side effects is that she has no recollection of the sex though. Her eyes turn blue when the sapphire's effects kick in, even MC noticed that. But everything that transpired before that, that happened naturally without outside influence.
 

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This is a bit of a mixed bag as far as being a Prologue that introduces a new project... You can't really tell if it will end up being a story based VN/Game or just a porn fest under the guise of magical corruption... There is a quite a bit of broken English mixed in, with several words being misused, before and after the back to back porn fest.. I really hate it when a bunch of sex is used in an introduction, because it feels forced and cheesy, almost like the story is planning to take a back seat to the erotic stuff... And it almost feels (to me) like the developers are using it as an advertisement ploy just to pull in as many fan donations as they can... I've seen this ploy used many different times... And usually it's a clue, that the rest will just be more of the same, with not so much a focus on good story telling... Not that I'm saying it will happen in this case, but it's usually a warning sign...

The visuals of the characters are not bad, for the most part... But I just feel like this plot setup feels a bit cheesy, and doesn't tell you a whole lot... I feel like I know more about this VN/Game from the tags, then I do from the cliff hanger plot reveal at the end of this Prologue... In any case, for being so short, and all it's flaws, it's not a terrible prologue... It just doesn't show enough about the project as a whole, and I'm a bit uneasy about the plot premise and how this ball will roll... This is a completely new project, just getting it's feet wet... So I understand, it may get better with time... I went ahead and posted my review (warning - the review has some spoilers)...

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probably shouldve waited to make a review on a prologue then based on what you made in your review imo this prologue out shines Midnight Paradise and should be considered the next Dreams of Desire the only reason why i didnt make a review is a could be wrong thus i will make a review when the second or third update comes out
When I do revisits, I usually update my reviews to reflect my new opinions of updated content as well as improvements and so forth... When that time comes, and I get the time to check it out... I will update appropriately...

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Overwritten is an understatement. So, so many words to describe what we can already see, or simply don't need to know.

A chore to click through.
 
4.20 star(s) 25 Votes