The review under mine kinda says it best, idk what more to really add its like...
The story starts off good, endearing even, and things are moving along as they would. Then its like SLAM SLAM SLAM SLAM SLAM Heres 30 new characters and a TON OF CRAP happening all at once. Thought we didnt have enough characters?! HERES 20 MORE!
It honestly is a bit whiplashy. I got to the end of act 1 and spoke out loud "well that was.... something" because I just dont even know how to take it lol.
Theres just so much happening, in so little time, and so much feelings rushed through, and time is of the essence, but at the same time, its just nonstop whiplashing you through things that people just wouldn't really whiplash through so quickly so it feels a bit jarring. For example MC loves his ex, truly loves her, cant get over her to basically being like "I am responsible for everything, wish I saw it sooner, have a nice life" and just zooms away from her at mach 5. Portrayed as torn for 2 years over her to instantly over her in a single night. Then you find out shes a key figure and has powers too and possibly the most important person!?! Ay caramba.
It's incredibly kinetic in a lot of ways, choices dont really do too much other than just solidify love interest or which route you're going down if I understand correctly, but you dont really influence key events in the story that might make for a larger change ie: MC moving out of his house for example. That felt like it should have been a choice to open one section of the title and close the other section and vise versa.
Writing is strange to say the least, dev is definitely a creative type, has some funny moments, can hold your interest by being a little off the norm, can hand that to em. But on the flip side characters went from like over the top silly to really serious out of nowhere too.
idk, all in all I dont know if I want to continue this or if I want to drop it lol. It has a very good and interesting premise going on but it was mentally taxing at the same time. Also the intro should be better explained, starting a game with 3 choices of Alchemy, Enhancement and Possession doesn't really tell us anything at all lol. Would be great to get like some actual intro text to explain how they would influence each route and what they would actively achieve. I went the enchanter route, which I was happy with but I felt like it was made to be that route in a way because the possession route and the alchemy route just dont fit into the narrative that was built around what was happening. However I didnt play the other routes so theres potential alot of it was different, idk. Would have been nice to have a little more explanation though.