Ren'Py Camp Klondike [Night Six Part Two] [Swimsoot]

[swimsoot]

I really liked this! The art style is interesting and engaging, especially in a world where half the games look basically identical, and there seems to be some real wit and humor to the characters. There's a nice vibe of cheerful horniness to it that I appreciate. I'm looking forward to see where this goes.

Wow! Thanks so much. I had a great time making it - learning to code, create, compose - and I have a lot of stuff already in the works for Day Two. It's basically the world I would love to live in. Tell your friends!

 

[iodio]

Great start!
The art is very effective, it may look too simple at a first glance, but I think it works really well and it's also very enticing.
The best parts are the teasing and the dialogues during the night around the fire, while the sandbox-y part before feels a little... rushed? (but still good!).
And the

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vibe without being an open rip-off (at least not at the moment).
Good luck with the project!

 

[swimsoot]

Great start!
The art is very effective, it may look too simple at a first glance, but I think it works really well and it's also very enticing.
The best parts are the teasing and the dialogues during the night around the fire, while the sandbox-y part before feels a little... rushed? (but still good!).
And the surprise book has a "Sex Education" vibe without being an open rip-off (at least not at the moment).
Good luck with the project!

Thanks! Yeah, the art takes some work, but I'm learning. I'll take the note on the sandbox. You might edit your post about the book in the event it tips things for others - no big worry either way - and yeah, it helps the story along in the next part. Thanks again for the thoughts and for the read!

 

[iodio]

You might edit your post about the book in the event it tips things for others

I thought it to be vague enough, but sure, I added a spoiler.

 

[swimsoot]

I thought it to be vague enough, but sure, I added a spoiler.

Thanks!

 

[Honey_]

so good!!! i really love it

 

[swimsoot]

so good!!! i really love it

I'm so pleased! Thanks for checking it out, it was a lot of fun to learn/build and there's Day Two on the way!

 

[jockywyness]

This is excellent. I'm sure there'll be people complaining about the art for whatever reason, but as another poster said, it's original, unlike 99% of the games on here, and it fits the story quite well. The animated aspects are great too!

Things perhaps develop a bit too unrealistically quickly for my own person taste, but it's a far cry from the typical ridiculous instant gratification you usually see. I think it strikes a pretty good balance between realism and the need to be, you know, a porn game. It's also nice to see game-heightened female sexuality represented in a respectful* way.

*I didn't read every line of dialogue carefully, so I could have missed some shittiness here and there.

 

[swimsoot]

This is excellent. I'm sure there'll be people complaining about the art for whatever reason, but as another poster said, it's original, unlike 99% of the games on here, and it fits the story quite well. The animated aspects are great too!

Things perhaps develop a bit too unrealistically quickly for my own person taste, but it's a far cry from the typical ridiculous instant gratification you usually see. I think it strikes a pretty good balance between realism and the need to be, you know, a porn game. It's also nice to see game-heightened female sexuality represented in a respectful* way.

*I didn't read every line of dialogue carefully, so I could have missed some shittiness here and there.

So glad you liked it! Yes to all your points. The art sure takes some practice on my part - and sometimes I just had to move ahead as it were. As to the speed of progression, yup, it's a balance. I figure they've been marinating all summer long and are champing at the bit for release. I'm also figuring that almost everyone in the group has something they've always wanted to try and this week *may* just be their best chance to blossom. Day Two is well on its way - I'll keep trying to avoid the shittiness!

 

[Mokey]

The artwork makes everyone look a bit demented. Effing love that. Rock on.

 

[swimsoot]

The artwork makes everyone look a bit demented. Effing love that. Rock on.

Right? Apparently I draw everything with my fist. Thanks!

 

[Saint Blackmoor]

Really loving this one Fresh, simple art but done well, I think relates to most of us here going to summer camp or spending the week at the beach and meeting that fleeting someone.
Good start, much success
swimsoot

 

[swimsoot]

Really loving this one Fresh, simple art but done well, I think relates to most of us here going to summer camp or spending the week at the beach and meeting that fleeting someone.
Good start, much success
swimsoot

So pleased! Yeah, summer camp... nothing like yearning in a bunk. Thanks for the read. More to come!

 

[Dar'Kais]

What's with their faces? Are they cursed?
Or is it such a drawing style? I would not want to see them at night(

 

[jockywyness]

So glad you liked it! Yes to all your points. The art sure takes some practice on my part - and sometimes I just had to move ahead as it were. As to the speed of progression, yup, it's a balance. I figure they've been marinating all summer long and are champing at the bit for release. I'm also figuring that almost everyone in the group has something they've always wanted to try and this week *may* just be their best chance to blossom. Day Two is well on its way - I'll keep trying to avoid the shittiness!

Yup, I totally get the 'marinating' thing, and it makes sense. Like I said, it's just my personal taste! Buuuuut...that sounds like perfect "skippable prologue" material!

Also, if your art improves with practice, that's always great, but please don't change it. Stick to your vision!

 

[swimsoot]

Yup, I totally get the 'marinating' thing, and it makes sense. Like I said, it's just my personal taste! Buuuuut...that sounds like perfect "skippable prologue" material!

Also, if your art improves with practice, that's always great, but please don't change it. Stick to your vision!

Thanks so much! I'm going down this road and am sticking to it.

 

[Mokey]

You've got something here. Fun, novel artwork, great dialogue, and a sense of pacing that is pretty much nonexistent in other games. I'm inclined to wait for the next update to see what your interval and productivity looks like, but otherwise I'm up for chipping in. Really strong start, and I'm optimistic.

 

[swimsoot]

You've got something here. Fun, novel artwork, great dialogue, and a sense of pacing that is pretty much nonexistent in other games. I'm inclined to wait for the next update to see what your interval and productivity looks like, but otherwise I'm up for chipping in. Really strong start, and I'm optimistic.

So glad to hear it. Yeah, pacing is a rare commodity. I'll keep shooting for the stars! Day Two is in the works as we speak. Thanks again.

 

[Alanthos]

Wasn't horrible. I will look forward to seeing a new updates.

 

[nahte]

Fucking dope, bro. If I wasn't beyond broke, I'd support the hell out of this. Well written, I love the art style, just great.