- May 15, 2021
- 25
- 100
I really enjoyed this one. Some of the writing was genuinely erotic (campfire/beach scenes) which is not something you see much in these games. The art seemed weird to start with, but it grew on me as I got immersed in the story, and by the end of the first night I was really impressed with how well the visuals worked with the writing.
However...
This is a kinetic novel, badly disguised with dead end choices and a poorly executed freeplay mode. People might accept the plethora of dead ends in the short term, but eventually it will just annoy them and they will walk away. I understand that making a truly interactive game is a lot more work, and requires skills that many people don't have. So if you want to do it all why not just make it properly kinetic? Or... better yet, get over the idea that making these games is a solitary affair and find someone who is more technically minded than creative to work with. Games that obviously mislead don't last long, and games that try to be all things to all people with a single creator end up taking so long for each chapter that people lose interest and wander off. (Being a DIK is the exception, although how people are still forking over insane amounts of cash for a story it's unlikely any of us will live long enough to see the end of is beyond me)
However...
This is a kinetic novel, badly disguised with dead end choices and a poorly executed freeplay mode. People might accept the plethora of dead ends in the short term, but eventually it will just annoy them and they will walk away. I understand that making a truly interactive game is a lot more work, and requires skills that many people don't have. So if you want to do it all why not just make it properly kinetic? Or... better yet, get over the idea that making these games is a solitary affair and find someone who is more technically minded than creative to work with. Games that obviously mislead don't last long, and games that try to be all things to all people with a single creator end up taking so long for each chapter that people lose interest and wander off. (Being a DIK is the exception, although how people are still forking over insane amounts of cash for a story it's unlikely any of us will live long enough to see the end of is beyond me)