Story:3/5
Grammar/English:2.5/5
UI:4.5/5
Characters:3/5
Progression:2/5
Gameplay:4/5
Graphics:4.5/5
(No major spoilers below)
Story:
There isn't too much of an actual coherent story to begin with, majorly its kind of a bunch of side stories with some overlapping "main" story around it, but for the most portion of the game you will be just tending to a bunch of separate things mostly not relating to each other, for a casual experience it's great but if you want a deep experience with the characters you see in the game, this isn't the game for you. The story points in the specific side missions for the different girls you see aren't done horribly, but they seem to lack any real depth to them.
Writing:
The writing in the game isn't too great, it's very evident the creator doesn't speak native English, which is fine, but it shows very clearly in the body of work, there's a lot of sentences that look that they are coming straight out of google translate, or seem weirdly worded, like they didn't know the right word to put in what place. The way the story is moved forward (which i talked about in the section above more) makes the game feel more like an animation gallery, rather than a big story, you don't have too many moments where you can lose yourself in the writing and feel immersed in the story, which is fine if that's the kind of game you're into. It's easy to just kind of autopilot while watching a video or a movie.
UI:
There's not too much UI, but the ones that are in use are well made, it's clear that a big bulk of the attention making the game was put into how the game itself works, alongside the interfaces you're faced with, they are one of the better spots in the game and were easy to use, and good looking.
Graphics:
Graphics are also one of the main stars of the game, they're simple sure, but they are effective, they're consistent and they're good because of that, the animations are solid, from the ones that I have seen, they are smooth, and in the gameplay loop itself everything seems to run well, nothing that moves seems super out of place, and in scenes its fluid and seems like its crafted well.
Gameplay:
The gameplay loop of the game is quite good, the experience itself gets rather repetitive but at no point does it feel overwhelmingly boring, the gameplay is very smooth, transitioning from area to area is very fluid and seems logical, bigger issues with it is that the character doesn't move too fast, so a sprint option would be very nice to have (if I've just not missed it) What you do in the game itself seems logical to the writing, being asked to do something and you actually have to go into the area, and do an action, then return, instead of the game taking your hand and moving you around for it, the exploration isn't too bad, it takes a little bit to figure out where everything that's not mentioned on the map is, but it's not a bad experience, since exploring to see the areas is at least somewhat enjoyable.
Last thoughts:
I would say its a solidly average game, maybe 3.5 would do it more justice than 4. although the issues I highlighted in the game do genuinely make the experience worse, and I hope that the creator does something about them, such as hiring/asking a native English speaker to help fix the dialogue, and maybe create more depth to the characters. But for a casual game to just run through its not a bad experience.