Can you give me feedbacks and rate these characters?

[Gst]

Hey guys, I'm planning to make a VN game but I'm new to CG so, I would really appreciate if you could give me a constructive feedback for these characters.
A little spoiler, the game is going to about seducing or blackmailing your strict and conservative Asian neighbor according to your choices. Genre: interracial, incest, anal, mmff, mff and likely more.

 

[RedGlow]

They look quite good actually but i would change long hair and browns of both of them , if i were you. Oh and petite girl's neck is way too long for my taste.

 

[Gst]

They look quite good actually but i would change long hair and browns of both of them , if i were you. Oh and petite girl's neck is way too long for my taste.

thanks for the feedback and particularly the neck. I will make it shorter. I didn't notice it before.

 

[muttdoggy]

I agree with MWeb on neck size

 

[Gst]

I agree with MWeb on neck size

i will render a new one right now ☺

 

[Gst]

is it good now?

 

[Faxes]

I would change the hairstyle of the second with a more youthful appearance
and smaller feet.

 

[RedGlow]

is it good now?

Actually , i was talking about different hair types not hair color but black looks good on petite girl but i wouldn't change anything on tall girl except her eyebrows. I liked what you did with neck size btw..
I would suggest you that use tall girl on first render and use petite girl on second render and try different hair types for petite girl but listen to your guts in the end because it is just my opinion GL in your project mate.
Note: I said change eyebrows because i don't like thin eyebrows

 

[Caligula]

View attachment 27472 is it good now?

Neck length looks definitely better.

I like the new hair colours, but that's a personal preference so it doesn't count very much.

 

[OhWee]

Yay! Normal women!

Looks nice.

I like both their hairstyles, although maybe the hair strands on the right are burying themsleves inside her chest a bit?

But if you were looking for other options for long hair:

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I think the hairstyles are fine though.

 

[Gst]

thanks guys for your perspective. I will make few minor changes and try out some other hairstyle and I will post it again along with new characters. Im still learning and this have been very helpful.

 

[muttdoggy]

Much better! Bangable!

 

[Gst]

left to right
The neighbor family (mother, elder daughter and younger), MC's daughter. ☺
ik something is wrong with younger D's hair, maybe shader error. Other than this, can i make it better?

 

[muttdoggy]

Not sure how to adjust render to fix the hair but all looks good.
Just a couple thoughts.. the older daughter has fairly pale nipples for an asian girl and the younger daughter has a rather thin head and neck.

 

[DeePorn]

i see nothing that needs to be improved. Congrats! It looks great

 

[watdapakisdis]

Have you considered changing the eyebrows of the 3 family members? I know they're supposed to look familiar due to being related but a minor change could help.

 

[Gst]

Not sure how to adjust render to fix the hair but all looks good.
Just a couple thoughts.. the older daughter has fairly pale nipples for an asian girl and the younger daughter has a rather thin head and neck.

youre right, darker nipples would look better.

Have you considered changing the eyebrows of the 3 family members? I know they're supposed to look familiar due to being related but a minor change could help.

I tried to change the brows before but I couldn't do it. I'm gonna have to dig dipper for this morph or find a workaround. I too hate the younger girl's eyebrows.

i see nothing that needs to be improved. Congrats! It looks great

Thanks Guys, I will keep improving myself, do a tweak here and there while I gather other resources. May Gbu and your sharp eyes. ☺

 

[vir_cotto]

Shouldn't redhead be "red" everywhere?

 

[Gst]

Shouldn't redhead be "red" everywhere?

not a natural one I guess she's an asian hottie

 

[Draghough]

Since there are ppl with different tastes or opinions you could make a customization set up when starting the vn , like changing hair , lipstick , eye color from a set of premades and perserve them during gameplay
Something like My strange sis does , and would please more ppl that way