Now that chapter 1 has been released, I want to update my initial review Please read on...
First let me get this out of the way because I already know what some of you are thinking and judging from some of the comments, I am right.
YES - There is "Vore"! If you do not know what that is, just Google it!
NO - It is not avoidable and it shouldn't be!
YES - There are oddities in the story and weird moments that do not make sense.
SO - If you don't like or can't stomach the concept of Vore, Unbirth, etc. simply move on. DO NOT download it!!
The Prologue encompasses a weekend. The MC returns to her childhood home to visit her mother a year after the disappearance/death of her Father. She arrives to a weird situation as her mother doesn't exactly look like she expected and the story just gets more weird from there. ALOT MORE WEIRD!!
The premise is well.... different. Going forward it will be interesting to see how the Dev builds on what the Prologue has established. The flow is quirky, and you are often left scratching your head over certain odd details, but to me, that is what adds to the charm. Just go with the flow and see just how far down the Rabbit hole you go.
The renders are fairly good. Not 4K, but good none the less and that is fine with me. Everything else is just an over the top WTF did I just play romp! I love it so far!!
Now that chapter one is out....
Glaring plot issues and the lack of any real surprise on the part of the MC as to what is happening to her aside...... I still love the story. FINALLY, we get a proper Vore fetish story that actually depicts the act of eating and being eaten in a plusible and graphic way. I had given up on this type of story because people just don't get it. All of the descriptions in the world can't replace the visuals!! I am still excited for the story and have decided to back the dev in the hopes that the story will continue. There are things that need to be fixed! I am not ignoring the plot holes and character issues, but at the same time, I love the story and can't wait for more.
1. Cara should be at least a little freaked out at what is happening to her yet she doesnt seem to be! Dev, at very least, inject some surprise and shock into her personality. Afterall, it isn't normal to wake up one morning with a Horse C*&K that you didn't have when you went to sleep!!
2. There is a predatory personality within Cara that manifests and it appears as though there are "two" unique versions of her. The original, shy and demure Cara should be freaking out or at least be very worried????
3. The events quickly move from the farm to an apartment and her job in a new school. None of the questions or mysteries have been answered and there is no early indication that they will be answered. I am sure we will get alot more information as the story moves along but, this has me going, wait a minute! What just happened and why isn't Cara all over her mother about this despite the preponderance of evidence that her mother is clearly lying to her and very much aware of the events both in the past and currently in play!! Surely Cara isn't that naive?
4. Cara is eaten by Gallo, then f&^*Kd by Gallo. She assists Ruby in her final act as Gallo's food. Spot gets fresh with her. Yet she moves on to her new job and all is right with the world? C'mon!!
As I said, there are glaring issues, that in any other story, I would rip to shreds but I just can't with this story. It is simply too much fun!!
The developer is on to something really cool here. Fix some holes and work on the story structure and it will be a masterpiece!!