VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - Catch the Bunny [v0.11] [Carrots]

  1. 4.00 star(s)

    libertypics

    4 stars and had hoped it would have reached 5 ones day. Really liked the drawn art, very faptastic, some good scenes, storyline was good and unique enough. Shame it was abandoned possibly due to real life world issues, would have liked to see it continue passed .11.
  2. 5.00 star(s)

    SpartanS11

    Love the appearance of the game and what I love even more is the optional horror addition, definitely a game changer for me. I can see that the game is trying to go for optional meta horror and that is just crazy appealing. Keep up the good work!
  3. 3.00 star(s)

    ericman

    As of v.011 the game has a bit of misspells and grammar issues. It was mentioned before that this game's story kinda goes off the rails and it sorta does, but that's not necessarily a bad thing. The art style is amazing, I love it! It leans towards that realism rather than anime style and I'm into that! As far as the sex scenes goes there isn't much as of right now, I do wish the main character could press a bit more on some of them but at the same time I do not want any of the characters feeling forced. This game certainly has great potential, if I could add something to this game it would be a gender swap, I love lesbian action, and to play as a female instead would be amazing.
  4. 2.00 star(s)

    Interracial UglyB NTR Fan

    started off well, great art, then a few days in 23 characters and 14 convoluted plotlines are introduced and you wont care about any of them

    plotline A, girl in new city, with new family and new school, will you help her transition?

    plotline B, drug dealers fundiung terorism, will you help the CIA stop them?

    games a few releases in and needs a revamp
  5. 2.00 star(s)

    Bingoogus

    Boring. By the fifth day i had that moment where you realise you don't care about anyone in the book/show/movie/game you're playing or what happens to them. MC spends way too much time in his head, performing boring exposition as internal monologuing. No one presents themselves as having complex inner minds, they're all just generic tropes and flimsy one dimensional characters.

    This VN needs a fair few more passes through the sawmill to cut it to size and hopefully produce an interesting piece.
  6. 2.00 star(s)

    Count_Chocula

    Boring, uninteractive game that’s basically a strict VN. It has good art but not very much of it. If you really like linear games, reading dialogue, and plot about minor drama between characters, this game may be for you. If that doesn’t sound appealing, steer clear.
  7. 4.00 star(s)

    sensei02

    Game is pretty good, awesome art. Would be fantastic if there were animations. Dialogue is good, and story is great so far, though english is a little less than perfect. Would definitely be interested in a walkthrough to see consequences of choices.
  8. 5.00 star(s)

    Emir55555

    I just played the game for the first time at v0.9. Art and dialogue are great. The characters and art in general are original. Only downside to the game so far is that some decisions didn't have any consequences even though they felt like they should have. For example, I chose to blackmail Ellie but she later on acted as if it never happened.

    But overal I liked the game a lot.
    There's a decent amount of content and the game looks well made on all aspects.
  9. 4.00 star(s)

    Edaten143

    I love the art and its rendering but the story are lacking and shallow, so many misused words in a conversation and some scene where you pretty much skip some dialogue/conversation/scene... like how you know ester go to the same university with you, she's studying journalism and other things, but ester suddenly coming late at night suggesting you to bust in in some political official house who are involve in some drugs business doesn't make sense... the introduction of the game seems promising and it would be such a waste since the game itself are beautiful to have such story...

    I know this is a porn game but I sure do hope you reread and rewrite some part of the game when its finish.... cuz overall, the story just doesn't make sense...
  10. 5.00 star(s)

    Deleted member 3250193

    This is a gorgeous game that has a lot of care put into it. The art has a unique look and is easily the best part of the game. Lots of great-looking love interests. The story is engaging, and I look forward to each update. There is a mild issue with the English in the game, but it isn't nearly as distracting as in other games.

    Absolutely worth your time, so give it a shot!
  11. 3.00 star(s)

    SinnedBad

    First off - the artwork in this game is amazing.

    The plot is not the worst and the writing, despite clearly not being on a native level, is serviceable, in my opinion.

    The gameplay as of version 0.7 is pretty shallow, the choices barely make a difference, but for a VN, that's just standard, I guess.

    The reason for why I can't give this more stars is because it features probably the most unsympathetic MC I've ever played. Even if you don't make "evil" choices for him, he's still kind of a douche. He oozes negativity, is never content with anyone or anything and you never feel like he is even capable of liking someone, least of all women. He's like a grumpy 9X year old man in the body of a 2X year old college student.

    I'm at a point where I think, I'll just skip the text and look at the pictures.

    But if you, unlike me, don't mind dealing with a MC like that, you can easily add another star for this game.
  12. 5.00 star(s)

    FranzAlistair

    Really love the artwork on this game, hope I can see this game finished and see more of it. The story is kinda meh at the moment but I don't see that a problem since this game was created only a few months back. Came in for the fap stayed for the visuals.
  13. 5.00 star(s)

    philister

    really good!
    I played quite a good amount of the games here on F95 and i think with some improvement to consequences, better bridges from story sequence to another and more deepness this could be a big thing.
    Also the spelling is a bit irritating, please seek counsel @ dictionary.
    Maybe more calm and diverse background music?
    Overall my hopes are up :)

    For every reader of these here words ,
    just try it out and enjoy
  14. 1.00 star(s)

    Optimelle

    v.0.7 at the time of this review
    So the art style is ok. Some people say it's fabulous, fantastic, amazing but hey, beauty is in the eye of the beholder.
    There is a ton of bad English dialogues and you have a handful of choices that have little consequence to the story.
    Not so much a game, or dating sim, as it is a visual novel in its current state. A visual novel with bad English is not the recipe for success. Hopefully this can become something better as time passes and options are more meaningful and the consequences are more obvious.
  15. 2.00 star(s)

    Ggwpglhf

    To start with I really like the art of this game but unfortually it's the only redeeming quality it has.
    The story is nothing original and just a mess, the characters are childish and the dialogue is just infantile and unrealistic.
    I was also pretty annoyed with the choices you have as they dont change the story whatsoever only change is your either a pussy or a cunt, you are still forced to let the stepsister hang out with a drugdealer, your only choice is if you want to take advantage of said drugdealer when initially you were concerned for the stepsister, easy path for sexual content but bad and incoherent storytelling.

    It's very short sofar and the "content" is mainly dialogues, and for a game reliant on sp much dialogue it just falls short in engaging or capturing the reader.
    It might still have time to be reworked I guess but I doubt this will get better with time as the writer obviously isnt a native english speaker.
    If the developer teamed up with another writer and just provided the art they could possibly make some great games because as I said before, I really liked the art and it deserves a good and coherent story to boot.
  16. 3.00 star(s)

    MarshmallowCasserole

    Kinda meh at this point.

    The art is nice, but the girls are starting to show signs of same face syndrome. Not the worst case of it among cartoon-styled porn, but adding more girls would be a dire mistake unless the new girls have some distinctive facial features.

    The gameplay is not exciting at all. It's a VN. Lots of text, very few choices. What's worse, the choices are very polarized. The guy is either a total friendzone material, or a creepy rapist. Something more of in-between please?

    Writing is also pretty meh, definitely not written by a native speaker and it shows. It's also not really serious, while not being funny at the same time. Zoomer College? Seriously?

    The good part is the update schedule is rather frequent, even if it has little content now, in a year it should have enough to justify at least three stars.
  17. 4.00 star(s)

    Minarin

    I've played quite a few games, but this is the first I'll have ever reviewed.

    Let's start with the good:

    - The art is fantastic. Bar none, this has some of my favourite art on the site of any game. Something about the colour choices and lineart is extremely appealing to me. There isn't very much art right now; not many poses, but there's a lot of potential here.
    - The characters are appealing. I particularly find Eva, Ellie and Ester interesting.

    Now to the OK:
    - The writing is uhh... Its very clear English isn't the native language of the writer, and that's okay, but an extra pass or two of the writing by native speakers would go really far. The writing quality is also OK. I agree with other posters saying the MC is either a complete dick or a complete doormat; I tried to go for a middle ground but there's some decisions that really either force you into being way too nice or abrasive as sandpaper. Wish there was more choice.
    - The music, while there is VERY LITTLE of it, suits the game well.

    Now, the not so good:
    - Content. Obviously the game is currently in 0.6v, so I can't say I expect a lot, but yeah.
    - Plot points. This kinda goes with the writing, but seriously its a glaring weakness. A lot of things don't make a lot of sense in the game (you buy chocolates, never to give them. You go on a top secret mission with Ester, only to dilly dally around and loiter. You go from not trusting Eva a bit to vouching for her to get a job in less than 24 hours.)

    Some things just don't make a lot of sense.

    Overall, I think the game has fantastic potential because of the art, and with a lot of work in the writing department, this could be great.
  18. 5.00 star(s)

    Beast161616

    The art is GOOD and very original. There isn't much content now but whatever content is in it is quality. There's no animation. The story is also original and interesting. But a bit too direct. You either be too controlling/hated or too softie/loved. I hope the dev makes a middle ground. Still a 10/10 from me.

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  19. 5.00 star(s)

    Abnur_tharn

    The Art is pretty cute.
    The character designs are cute as well.
    The Dialogue is pretty decent. In both routes

    and I love the 2 routes : romance/Corruption

    can't wait for more Content with both Eva and Ellie :)
  20. 5.00 star(s)

    wutdafook

    unique art. This is my first review on this site ever this game is incredible . Keep it up developers, bring the final version as soon as you can, look forward to the final editions!!!! Amazing game!