Ren'Py - Onhold - Chained Girl [v0.3] [Ahentaiguy69]

was nice to have a game where it doesnt shy from beating a bitch into submission and then violating her. hope to see some beast in the future, some more fleshed out activities, and some diabolical punishments

Love the story, im exited to see all the routes they plan for the future.
the only problem right now is the art. some images makes the girl looks fat and even though she isnt fat, like you can see the main art on the main page, she looks fat there i hope it gets better with time.
nonetheless A preaty solid demo

Excellent for a demo! Love the story and where this is heading, only thing that can be worked on is the UI and the art, but everything else I would criticize is addressed and going to be fixed by the developer. Can't wait to see where this goes.

5 stars because this game has amazing potential
<5 min of content so far
Very similar to old Pink Tea games and Slave Hunter from Deviant Panda

Art is simple, but I like it
No sound, Id suggest the dev to try and find a way to add sound effects for the girl because that adds so much to the game

As of v0.2 there isn't a lot here, but what is here is promising. The art is a bit rough, but well-executed and I personally find it a nice blend of erotic and charming. The writing is workmanlike, and it also seems fluent and is totally suitable to task. There is no sound or animation at this time, and I didn't encounter any bugs.

The plot entails you as the kidnapper of the titular character, and there seems to be a mechanic wherein you will be balancing corruption/subjugation actions against noise/discovery.

It's still early days, but I'm curious to see how this one turns out.

What's currently available is a short (<10 minute) demo.

This game is an honest effort at a text-choice based, sadistic kidnapping fantasy VN.

There's no sound or music (or it wasn't working, I'm not sure), no animations, just some plain looking vaginal penetration, fingering, and physical abuse. As bondage content goes, the shackles look okay, but the chains lead to nowhere most of the time, which breaks any immersion with the art.

The art is simple, and very amateur. Erotic writing isn't really something I ever enjoy consuming so I have no comment about that aspect.

Could be the start of an interesting project. May the wind be at the dev's back for that. But right now, I can't recommend giving this attention, because it's basically nothing.

Alrigth, the game remeber the olds slave lords, this game have potential and have a cool flow.
I know the game have his own art style, but is a pretty ugly
I will recomend the game

saying about grades: (5 its the average)
Text quality: 8/10
Art: 6/10
Gameplay:9/10
Immersion:8/10 (You are the protagonist)
General:7/10 So far

Brazilian Guys Aproved Seal :}