VN - Ren'Py - Chance Encounter [v0.1] [Sorrow]

I hate to write a negative review, but I feel the 5 star one needs some balance. The writing in this VN is not good. The story, the pacing the plot and the characters are all not good. There are elements of the plot that are absurd, like the half-elf having three changes of clothes while they are dungeon crawling. Talking about what they are doing like school children playing dungeons and dragons.

The models are reasonably decent, although the half-elf and female Max basically have the same face.

Three stars would be very generous. I think some proof reading might help. This game is NOT a 5 star game.

Overall, I liked it (short, but with a logical plot).
Perhaps too much in the spirit of the game "Goblin's Pet".
I would have preferred a story with less influence of goblins, but more interaction with other characters (adventurers, innkeeper, blacksmith, etc.).
I would have made the ring itself cursed - returning to the finger on its own (at the most inopportune moment).