HTML - Abandoned - Changes of My Body [v0.10] [DIFFERENCE]

I normaly dont rate games before 0.3 - but this shouldnt be here. Or to be precise it should not be on patreon.

This is more of an test piece, but not a game.

There are random images - the test is not formatted at all.

There is not a single bit of care or passion in this project and that would be fine for someone to test Twine, but not when you also have a patreon running.

Not at all a good game, I was honestly really disappointed. Game needs to be proof read badly, needs to not just be random HTML porn. I don't want to be overly critical, but this was really really sloppy. Just do some editing before you launch it please.

Something to know about starting anything is that you are going to be bad at it to begin with. Everyone always starts off bad. Its natural and is a part of the learning experience.

This game is clearly an example of someone's first game, who is still learning twine and to whom english is not their native language. As such, there are so many basic problems with it. When first page has broken images, its never a good sign.

I understand that when you make something, you want to show it to the world and get a response, butyou should not release a game in this state. I think that the creator should hold off on posting any updates to the game and instead work on fixing and polishing it himself. Let him be the first critic and only when the game is in a state that he is happy with, he should post the update.

It is also worth knowing that its okay to scrap an early game. Sometimes a piece of work is better as a learning experience than a product itself.

Just improve in private and then come forward when you are better at creating, with something that will leave a postive impact

Stolen art html "game" where you switch between real porn, 3d porn, and hentai.
Poorly written and poorly spelled dialog crammed in between the pictures.
I can't really think of a single good thing I could say about this

its good first release but it feels like we are in the middle of the game here u can make use of the frist changes that happening to MC and show us the day to day changes so start from maximum masculinity in that way ur game will live longer (so make use of every step of the changes and dont rush it)

You know how in most games with stolen art the characters change from one scene to the next?

This "game" goes a step further and jumps from real porn to hentai to 3D renders, all while featuring more spelling mistakes than pictures.

This is low, even for HTML stolen art standards.