VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - Cheating Wife [v0.1] [SAKYOP]

The writing is barely intelligible. The renders are grainy in the extreme and don't load properly, with one screen bleeding over into the next. The script file is so full of mistakes I had to open it in Ren'Py and fix them myself before I could even get a minute into it.

The story is barely there; the husband sends an office peon to his house to give his wife some dumb message (because in this world, apparently phones haven't been invented yet). Clumsily modeled sex sort of ensues. Or would have, if the game hadn't been abandoned. So we will never learn why the bedroom door of a one-story house is twice as tall as the male character.

Nice idea to make a game about this genere, but the graphic is low quality, the story is extreme short and the interaction between the characters is bad. The short game is at the moment more like a teaser. Anyway the game need a lot of improvements to become a good game.

At the moment there are more bugs than scenes... I would wait for it to reach .5 or higher. Also, the one scene that is there is not really a scene in my eyes. This isn't even a demo, it's barely an introduction into the story.