Rev @ Chetta: The Machinery Girl [v0.21.0 Demo]
The Machine Girl needs a good debuggering.
Art's good enough; better than MS Paint porn, tits are tit-shaped, and it's all better than I could do.
Writing's a bit bwuh. Scenario's half-baked, narrative and characters are thin.
Couldn't judge the porn; the only bit I got was sketch-quality in the skip-the-intro summary as everything else caused the engine to softlock.
First bug I got was in the engine loading screen(s). Intro backstory softlocked. Skipping the intro worked until it didn't. All the fancy current-gen GFX options are a waste of GPU flops but come back if/when you have to give the engine the three-finger salute after one of its softlock episodes. Too resource-greedy for what it is.
TLDR: Yer demo didn't demo much, mate.
The Machine Girl needs a good debuggering.
Art's good enough; better than MS Paint porn, tits are tit-shaped, and it's all better than I could do.
Writing's a bit bwuh. Scenario's half-baked, narrative and characters are thin.
Couldn't judge the porn; the only bit I got was sketch-quality in the skip-the-intro summary as everything else caused the engine to softlock.
First bug I got was in the engine loading screen(s). Intro backstory softlocked. Skipping the intro worked until it didn't. All the fancy current-gen GFX options are a waste of GPU flops but come back if/when you have to give the engine the three-finger salute after one of its softlock episodes. Too resource-greedy for what it is.
TLDR: Yer demo didn't demo much, mate.