VN - Unity - Completed - Chona [v1.11] [NTRMAN]

No build up, no tension and choices don't matter. It's one of those "living with a slut" story with some quick sex L2Ds.
If you want to set your mood, read the story. If you want a quick wank, hit that NTRman watermark for full gallery.
Maybe NTRman wants to try new ideas, or maybe he wants to get quick buck to fund his upcoming big project? Either way, these fast food porn are "edible".

im not into incest mother style, but damn that bully and ther scenes... amazing!

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I do agree that the writing and pacing are just exist and really shallow, but the quality of 2DCG with an animated loop, I would give it 5/5 (compared to the overall 2D animated style on this site only)
It's a fast-food porn style.

I think the plot and story is decent and gotta say better than the previous one with Christa and Tonyo, intriguing. But for an NTR game, it's kinda underwhelming for me for sure, C&T kinda felt better in NTR because your loved one snatched from you and you're left alone, this one with Chona is pretty mild.
The artstyle and animation are amazing, typical by NTRman. Tho it's short, it felt genuinely better in terms of story compared to C&T.

-The NTR hits way too fast, and as someone who’s into corruption in NTR games, it’s kinda disappointing.
+The animation in this game is the best NTRMAN's ever done. If you are a fan of "motherly NTR", this game is really great, with animation quality far above NTRMAN's previous "mom NTR" works.

I thought it was going to be suck because at the beginning, it really does feel like NTRMAN goes back to his comfort zone and make the same old NTR story with an evil shota as a antagonist but then, it doesn't exactly play itself as much as NTR supposed to be.
If you think that cheating is an important part of NTR, then I'd say that this game feel more like a cuckold story and if you changed the perspective, it really does feel like one of those shota hentai where the protagonist get to fuck the mom of his friend rather an actual NTR story, if that make any sense.

so in a way, the cheating, the tension feel extremely light compare to his previous projects, but what it does, it leans more into the cuckold element rather than the raping or cheating.
and while I'm not a big fan of that, I am a big fan of how NTRMAN get to experiment his stories outside of his comfort zone and I CAN'T wait to see what he has to offer next.

Now, for the bad stuff. it's suck that there are barely any voice acting in this game, and while it make sense how the other game was pretty much set in South East Asia, this game doesn't feel like it needs to be set on that location once again. I'm not a big fan of the setting but then this one isn't exactly a big issue.
The biggest issue with this game is the fact that there are barely any choices and I can't help but to imagine what it could be if there are choices that actually matter, considering what the story actually about.
What if MC get the choice to sleep with his mother?
What if you can choose to share her?
And what if you can change the ending in the game?

It should've been 3/5 stars despite how much I praise the game but honestly I'm just going to give it 4/5 because the epilogue is great. I love the epilogue. banger.

this game is the definition of a game without soul, sadly.

Once again NTRMAN giving us his usual top tier art with the same boring ass story as (almost) every other game of his. It feels like he makes 3 or 4 of these and then decides to create an actual good one like Tenants of the Dead or Arrival of the Goddess, so we have to wait for one of those bangers.

so yeah, not a good one but not a bad one either, just boring.

I like art.
I feel like NTR happens too quickly, but that's how NTRman makes his short games.

The story is simple, has decisions that change the ending, and I liked the double ending. I feel like NTRM gets a lot of criticism because these games aren't like "Adelaide Remake." But it was his longest game.

Rating: ★☆☆☆☆ (1/5)


This VN-style NTR game is a complete disappointment and honestly feels like nothing more than a lazy cash grab. From the moment you start, it’s clear that very little effort was put into any aspect of the game — story, art, pacing, or even basic originality.


The "plot" is essentially a copy-paste job from the developer’s previous titles, just with slightly different names and settings. If you’ve played any of their earlier games, you’ll see the same tired setup, the same predictable twists, and the same recycled scenes. There's zero creativity here, just the illusion of something new slapped onto a reused template.


What makes it worse is how bland and lifeless everything feels. Characters are one-dimensional and act like walking clichés, the writing is painfully stiff or outright cringe, and the emotional weight — which is crucial in a genre like NTR — is completely absent. There’s no build-up, no tension, no sense of loss or descent. It’s just hollow events being thrown at you until the game ends.


The art is passable at best, but when paired with a soulless, recycled narrative, it does nothing to save the experience. Add in the fact that the entire thing is over in under an hour with no meaningful choices or consequences, and you’re left wondering why this was even released.


Simply put, this game is low-effort trash. It doesn’t even try to be more than what it already was last time — just slapped together to sell under a different title. There’s nothing engaging, nothing new, and certainly nothing worth your time or money. Avoid it.

NTRMan needs to stop making these games on his own, cause he's clearly struggling.

Everyone knows the routine, most reviews of recent games are equally as true for this one: good art, boring premise, bad writing. The man has turned this into a factory of just churning out the same rubbish, over and over, ad nausiem.

Genuinely hope the man gets an actual writer in so there's more to his 'games' than just the regurgitated porn dialogue, cause he COULD make something good.

This is his best recent work—going back to NTR, to his "roots." Not quite a 10/10, but if he keeps this up, he might get there. I do wish he showed more than he wrote—for example, showing the guy unable to contain himself and having a J. Arthur Rank .


All in all, a decent game. A nice dose of NTR to brighten up your day. Shame about the whole patreon debacle and ss.

So, did not like this one and agree to games of NTRMAN are getting worse and worse. I really liked there early work but it feels to me that the writing got a huge hit.

I was looking forward to it because thought it would be a shota work but sadly no. That is fine but then the uncle is added and don't know... Not my cup of tea.

The biggest problem is the writing. No scene has room to breath and just goes so fast it is insane. Also why even add stuff you can pick if it does not change anything. Like the hitting the guy. If you don't or do it will give the same event. Like why even add it?

Whoever is behind the atrocious writing in the past few games of NTRMAN needs to be fired. I'm not saying that in the past the writing and the progression were something incredible but at least there was some sense of pacing and development and this is just ridiculous, the only thing that changes from game to game is whether is the husband or the son that is getting cucked and the setting of the story
The art and animations are clearly the only thing that has effort put into it, the voices too are very nice
Gameplay is regular, exactly what you would expect from a VN
At this point I don't think he cares about anything besides putting fast food on the table for the supporters of his extremely successful patreon

like every game of ntrman. the art good, the gameplay none, the story is same. jump on the first dick she can get, and then cant live without dick anymore. all of it happen in 1 day.

give it 2 star for the sake of ntrman.

Best so far amongst the "shorts" he has done. Wished it was longer with more routes. Based on the plot of the story its easy to have multiple routes such as rich man(might be redundant based on his last work), old man etc. but regardless its his best so far. Hopefully he takes the learnings here and continues to be better

story 5/5 - believable and realistic didnt jump the shark or was rushed

animation/ scenes 5/5 wished there was anal. There are new positions or POV here which made it better and unique. Wished there were more detail on feet but that's a personal pref hence no negative on the score.

Update: Since I finished SMW, i wished chona was as long as that story or as many scenes but overall doesn't dock my point

Finally, an NTRMAN game that seems to be his own. This one shows the dev's roots, well-polished mom ntr with a desire for more...

The art is impeccable as always, and the setting is one of the dev's best. The game has the same pace as the dev's prime, so I didn't understand the criticism about that. It's very worthwhile, and I hope to see more about the game.

The POVs could have been better utilized; it gave the impression that it could have been better, but nothing that disrupts the immersion.

Yikes.

Just Yikes.

Ever since NTRMAN got a new writer or whatever he announced some months ago, the quality of the games has only been going down and down. This is no exception.

The art is good, animation are nice - standard NTRMAN quality. But that doesn't make up for the god awful writing.
The fact that it's just another almost instant slut game is horrid. There is barely-to-none build up in the story. Everything just happens so fast. I remember when it used to be about tension and stakes with NTRMAN but it's just flop after flop.

I really hope he fires whoever is writing this and just starts doing stuff on his own again. Even if it takes longer for the product to come out, I'm fine with that. Quality > Quantity. This is not WW2, the Soviet tactic of rushing them down until they drown isn't working well in this case.

TL;DR - Disappointment.

Classic NTRMAN slop nothing more there no story no brain cell nothing just nothing ART and scenes good but again again again same story BULLY STOLES MOM and mom becomes loyal slut thats it i am sure they gonna be soooo happy with baby i am sure bully not gonna kick that baby you know?

Ntrman really entering slopfest right now story short and makes no sense no buildup here too just oh you have dick ? then i am your slut story nothing more really.

Art amazing sure sure animations good and scenes ? well its worth to play other than that its worth 1 star i am not even joking i am giving 4 STAR FOR ART AND ANİMATİONS not to story or characters because thats worth 1 STAR.