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VN - Ren'Py - Completed - Christmas Eve [v1.0.0] [Jonesy]

  1. 5.00 star(s)

    mmwookie

    Very well done.
    Nice touch with the isolated and stranded in a strange but welcoming place.... where feelings blossom and inhibitions melt away as the two grow closer from shared loss, and the undeniable urge of attraction unable to restrain itself without the distractions from the outside world holding back desire... *chef's kiss*
    looking forward to future updates/projects. 5/5 easy
  2. 4.00 star(s)

    Yngling

    Review v0.3.1

    The setting is a young daughter getting stuck inside a cabin with her (step) dad.

    I didn't see the patch in time, so I played without it and it was a bit off-putting. But a patch exists, so it's my fault I guess, but the dev could also have the player define the relationship in the beginning, like a lot of other games do. In the version I played, the non-blood-related thing was emphasized a number of times in the dialogue so I don't know how the patch handles that.

    This has been done before, most notably in the game/VN "A Petal Among Thorns (APAT)." It has so much similarity that it's hard not to compare the two. The similarity even extends to the art style (big eyes!) in some ways.

    Compared to APAT, the pacing is a bit faster here and the power is more balanced. In APAT, the daughter was the main instigator, seducing her rather reluctant dad. Here, the daughter is still the initial instigator but her father is a lot less reluctant. Objectively, it's fine. It feels a bit rushed but APAT was perhaps a bit too slow/reluctant/indecisive. In my personal opinion, the pay-off in APAT was a bit stronger though. On the other hand, this game does not contain any sci-fi elements or unneccesary side characters, which is a bonus. The game does contain some strong hints about the other family members who are left at home eagerly awaiting their return, and, apparently, the MC's cock, hinting to a sequel, like, again, APAT.

    The art style: the body of Eve is really nice. I'm not sure such girls exist in real life, but if they don't somebody needs to invent them ;). It's really great, petite but not creepy. Curvy but not too much so. The eyes are unnaturally big, which is a stylistic decision by the dev. It's unnatural but it still looks attractive to me, so my verdict is rather neutral. I didn't overly like the amount of make-up that Eve wears (also during shower scenes...) but that's my opinion. The problems start with the way the light is reflected in those eyes, which is not done well. Also facial expressions could use some work. They are there and they are appropriate, which is more than some other devs achieve, but they are not fully natural in several cases. The biggest problem I have is with Eve's pussy and ass, which look pretty undetailed and unnatural. This kind of ruins the close up scenes. Daz can do much better nowadays.

    The renders of the cabin are OK. At least the scenery used in the game is not overused like in so many other games. However it is not the most beautiful or detailed scenery. The MC is hardly seen, so there is not much to comment on, but at least he doesn't detract from the experience, which is I think a good thing. However the game does not go out of it's way to avoid showing the MC when it's necessary. I personally think that the game pretty much hits the sweet spot here in that respect, although others may have different opinions.

    Verdict: 4/5.

    Despite the game's art issues, I did thoroughly enjoy playing it. So I am detracting one point for the art. I am not detracting any points to the similarity to APAT, because, again, I did enjoy playing this game and I realise that there are only that many ways to write a slice-of-life F/D game and most games need to use one trope or another.
  3. 5.00 star(s)

    Goliathan

    This game is really great. I really like the dialogue between the characters. It just seems more natural than most VNs. The renders are pretty good for the most part. Not perfect, but overall pretty great for a first title. This is a really fun game, even if it is a little derivative of other games, it seems to go it's own way eventually. Lot's more good to outweigh any bad in my opinion. I look forward to seeing more from this dev.
  4. 5.00 star(s)

    SlobKnob

    Wow, very impressive game! I love the interaction between the characters, and this AVN strikes a nice balance of pacing between H scenes that are unrealistically quick to happen or drag you along taking forever to get to the fun parts. It also does an excellent job of introducing you to some of the other ladies, a realistic reason to add them to the fun times in future updates, and even some opportunities for flashbacks to other sexy times. All the ladies shown were super attractive and fresh. I loved the intensity of the H scenes so far. They are more what you might fantasize them to be, hang ups be damned. Take the seed that made you, and all that. ;)
  5. 5.00 star(s)

    Deleted member 2368932

    This game is a good time. Is it flawless? No, it is isn't. Then why am I giving it 5 stars? I got 5 stars worth of enjoyment out of it, that's why!

    First let me address the obvious. Yes, this game shares some similarities with Lockheart's A Petal Among Thorns. As that is my fav AVN of all time, I really don't mind. Its more an homage than any kind of ripoff, as it is very much its own game.

    I do have some criticisms of course. The pacing feels a bit rushed, there were a fair few typos, and some facial expressions didn't look great. Those are all minor complaints though. Despite my issues with the pacing, and that might just be me, I thought the writing was solid. I especially liked the sexy dialogue, it was really hot. The renders look pretty good for the most part. I LOVE that all the LIs are some degree of petite/slender. In a world of exaggerated curves and massive-chested milfs, it really is a nice change of pace. Becky especially has a build to die for. I like the nice and calm music too, and the whole game just has this lovely wholesome vibe to it. When you keep in mind that this is the dev's first title, it really is quite impressive! I def enjoyed my time with it enough to warrant 5 stars.

    If you like F/D games, and especially if you like Lockheart's work, I really urge you to give this one a go!