VN - Ren'Py - Completed - Christmas with My Sister [Final] [InkandTease]

Pretty nice,

Short and funny. The animation is the highlight of this. I think it would be great to mention this are really short stories. Good ones, but very short. The actual characters are pretty good and the story made sense.

I say keep at it. Have one more story to go through.

V.complete

first off, to tag this as a VN is a serious misrepresentation.
VN stands for visual novel. not every book is called a novel because not every book is worthy of it. only on sites like this does a short story get tagged as such and it really is wrong.

then we come to the fact that the female has two names. her dialogue is tagged with ALLY, yet dialogue names her something far from ally.
writer and coder on different planets. sloppy, very sloppy and not the first time if i remember right.

the short story is basic porn plot with average writing and little to like.
art is okay to look at but clearly where all the time was spent and even then, is not enough. not much happens so not much to look at.

with two dropping same day, this is like the twin in the shadow.....until you try that too