Review Chapter 1: (chapter 2 below)
10-15 hours of good story story with a nice implementation of sex scenes.
Love it, story, passion in the game, the focus in the story, creator really put a lot of effort in this story and universe <3
Excelent world introduction. good develop of characters.
a nice hentai fantasy story with many character for every taste.
A excelent first chapter that introduce what expected in the next years
(I HOPE SO) According the descriptions there is a planning story for 4 years aprox. is amazing all the planification behind. the love in this project is very noticeable regarless the limitations.
Pros:
Nice introduction of world
You can read as a normal novel (off course, under a context of sex novel)
-too many content. and enjoyment.
-LOT OF SEX SCENES, like a sexgame should be.
-Funny moments and characters very enjoyable.
-Barely have bugs, game not creash in basically any moment. (4 times play game)
-regarless been a sex novel you can take serious. also comic scenes have a good implentation. and characters take serious themselves. so its very enjoyable <3
-Take decitions, you can choose which routes take it. if a vanilla one or NTR. probably author plan increase all this. in next chapters.
-All characters designs have an amazing diversity, and character, I think the faces of the characters are not shared with almost any other.
you can found fatty girls, slim, thics, slim, small, freckles, talls. with many variety of hairs and face combinations. None of the characters here I have seen share similar faces or traits in another game.
-The story have many characters, and show you futures protagonist like a marvel movie.
-Enjoyable characters, specially waifus.
-the duration for a first chapter promises too much.
-Many plataforms, play in Browser online, Android, IOS, pc, tablet.
-Basically bugs not exist, i play 3-4 times and not found any.
CONs:-
-Some characters always have a pokerface. probably exist 5 faces, for all character and you gonna see pokerface all the time. however, after consulting and testing the HS2. making all these types of faces is very VERY time consuming and seeing that the focus is on the story, this detail can be forgiven.
Due the most noticeable moments are sex scene, in story characters are more charismatic. instead last part of the game, author make more facial expression.
-The most wasted area is the RPGMAKER engine. for make more chooices.
-Too simple gameplay, and HUD this is a wasted considerating the engine. but due focus is story, i can forgive.
-No backlog.
-Need more savedata for remembering "sexy" or funny moments. 99 savedatas slots. solved after act 2.
-Gallery needs finish game.
I think despite all the failures. the game can be significantly improved, I fully recommend it.
according author next
Review chapter 2:
without a doubt a great improvement compared to chapter 1.
Chapter 2 ACTa1 improves in all aspects, finally the RPG MAKER makes sense of use, and does not feel like a RENPY novel in RPGMAKER, apparently the author wants to make situations similar to ONEONE1 games (with their respective limitations of course)
Characters more charismatic and better written.
Kaeno is very expressive and all his of him appears are full of sprites with many designs and clothes changing according to the current suit.
the renders have more extensive scenarios than chapter 1 and better detailed, (the details are lost somewhat in the 720p version, but they are noticeable in the 1080 version)
pros:
-Everything described in the first chapter
-Kaeno is extremely charismatic compared to Bartho.
-Although the previous chapter, sex was justified by the context, here it is implemented in a "more realistic" way
-So far all the girls presented have their stereotype well defined
-You have more exploration options and dialogues that change depending on your actions (I hope this will be maintained for all subsequent games.
-The sex dialogues are better, I must admit that in chapter 1 they were much more monotonous.
-The maturity of the characters goes according to age, this time it feels more fluid and credible.
-Now the RPG MAKER has scenes that change depending on the decisions, I won't spoil them, but apparently they could become like ONEONE1's.
-The sex scenes are now much much more erotic, LAVIGNIA AND SAORI <3
-Finally NO MORE POKERFACE. <3
Cons:
-The villa feels a little smaller than it apparently should be.
-the hud again is simple