VN - Ren'Py - CIBERCOMBAT2089 [v1.1] [Kevin468]

Cyber***Combat was very disappointing for me. It's another poorly inspired futuristic game where the direction is up in the air.

My pros:
The Models

My Cons:
The story
Writing
Dialogue

Other than the obvious takeaway, which is the dialogue the choices are generic. Bad means submissive bystander I guess and Good means strong dominant guy or whatever. We ran into a random girl and the next thing she does is invite him to sleep at her house? Did I miss something? They're not totally strangers right?

He starts dreaming out loud which made laugh, meanwhile the strangers, not so stranger girl stars crushing on him. He also got abducted by The S.H.I.E.L.D or a generic version of one with a hot nazi like character, good vibes..

That was basically it. The language kills most of the experience as does the generic feel, maybe level out the story a little more, and get a proofreader will be a nice place to start.

Prologue:
I think this a good start for a prologue, enough story to get you hooked without overdoing the small details.
Visually the characters are done well, and the layout is really simple to move in.
You get a good sense of the cyberpunk vibe, the females are hot and there is a horny milf that is very hot.
The story is believable and the music complements the game and doesn't overpower it.
Good sound effects and FX.
The dialogue is very good for a foreign DEV.
I think the game is going to be a keeper.