VN - Ren'Py - City Devil: Restart [v0.3.0] [Sabirow]

Pros: renders and animations are clean.


Cons:

1. Game is short right now but the main con is Writing. Author doesn't seem to be native English speaker so there's a lot of grammatical errors and poor word choice. Dialogs also lack depth.
2. Random events like visiting brothel two days into a new city when you suspect your father might have been killed just breaks immersion cuz it's not realistic.
3. inner monologue is kinda cringy cuz it makes the MC sound very immature (cliché horny).

Final verdict: I would wait till next few updates to see if it improves.

Super high quailty. Next-gen perform exprience.
This game is my game of the year.
The render is awesome.
The character design is simply briliant!
Story telling is also so much potenial.
Almost everything is perfect.

Some dialogues needs work, but overall I actually read through every single interactions. I'm one of those that just "control" and "space" through most dialogues, but this game made it not so tedious and enjoyable. The use of the animations is insanely good, makes the story feel alive.

MC can either be a beta simp, a decent average dude, or a gigachad. Story really is up to your choices. Also love the hidden power and how the story is unfolding.

Supported on patreon. Please continue the amazing work!

I really wanted this VN to work for me but it didn't.
Pros:
Quite beautiful Renders.
The Horrorscene gave me chills.
and thats where the Pros end for me because i couldn't endure the MC any longer. Guy thinks with his Penis like a 14 year old seeing breasts for the first time, i stopped playing when he desperatly searched for a brothel.

Let just say this is Eternum but with ways more animation. And the story is just unique in its own way so no complain from me 10/10. But I got a problem with the MC being way too forward about what he want. Just feel weird Caz most of the game I played are just Virgin start so and not getting to know about his prologue in Ver 0.1 is weird.
Just my option.

It's nice looking game, with beautiful animations, for now it's only v0.1, but I already feel great experience. The story is also mystery and have a good future for my opinion, so my rate is 5/5.
One cons for me, music and echi voice/sounds are one audio track, so for louder voice you must louder music, will be great to separate them, or make the music quieter than the sounds.

Really impressed with what I've seen so far.

The story is good, and I'm looking forward to seeing how it progresses. The characters shown are all visually appealing and varied in their appearance. The UI is fantastic. The animations are great not just for the lewd scenes, but in general, there was far more than I expected from a first release, and they add a lot more "life" to the game.

The only gripe I have is the minor misspellings and grammar mistakes, but other than that, a solid first release.

So far this is a great start. The visuals and story on this are fantastic. I really hope this one doesn't fall into the same hole that most others do, as far as being abandoned or take 30 years to develop. This may be the first one I support financially.

I was really surprised by this. The animations in general not just the lewd scenes are really good and smooth. The story from what I've gathered is pretty interesting and I'm ready to learn more about what's going on in the upcoming updates. I can tell the dev is putting a lot of love into this project and that makes it even more promising.

I highly suggest anyone that's interested in the genre should give this one a try.

I actually enjoyed playing this VN, honestly I didn't think I'll be writing a positive review as my first impression on model renders weren't that good. Yet the flow of plot and storytelling caught my attention.
Plot feels retro Japanese anime movie concept, character models look somewhere in between 2D - 3D (I'm not a fan of this type of renders) design from early 2000 video games. H-scene was really well done especially Yumiko but Olivia is equally good. Also most if not all girls have variety in design type and diversity is appreciated.
Chapter - 1 is well made UI is simple yet efficient. Sounds are cool. Art concept is fresh in terms of generic daz models. Overall it was a fun experience. Keep it up with regular update. Thank you, Dev.

Reviewing as 0.1.

Quality of game is simply AMAZING. Here we have awesome animated cinematics (quate a lot), great visuals (for HS game), simply GORGEOUS UI, variety of different girls. Hopefully it not gonna get abandoned and wishing dev a good luck!


Story seems alright by now, has a couple of misspelings, understandable for a non english guy. Sometimes no music, but overall 5/5