VN - Ren'Py - City vs Corp [v0.1.0] [GrayWardenGames]

  1. 1.00 star(s)

    EyeWish1

    Version 0.1.0 played for a few minutes

    *Take this with a grain of salt because I couldn't bare playing any longer due to odd game design choices.

    Appears to be a story about a large corporation that invades a small town for nefarious purposes.
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    Pros:

    1- Some really nice looking characters.

    2- The set design was pretty well done. Attention to detail gave some locations a really nice atmospheric feel.


    Cons:

    1- You do not see the MC's face, so many of the renders were affected by odd camera angles.

    2- Since you do not see the MC's face the dev decided to darken the other characters faces while he speaks to them. Giving off the appearance that a light is going on and off over their heads. I found it incredibly distracting and, IMO, a poor choice.

    3- A few odd character design choices. The MC's friend Adam looked like he had a birds nest for hair, while Adam's "Mother" looked no younger than seventy. She was hot as hell, but a GILF, not a MILF.

    4- Too many instances where dialogue options were not available. Leaving the reader with only one choice.

    5- Characters would slide off screen when they were done speaking. Cute, but not really necessary. (Nit picking)

    6- The dialogue was okay, but could use a little help. It was rather bland.

    Final thoughts:

    The game has potential, but too many odd design choices killed it for me. I wish the dev good luck and hope he/she thinks about some of my comments.