VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - Clara Corruption [v1.1] [Hungry Lips]

Version: 1.1

Lol okay then. Well that was a kinetic dank mess. The story, plot, pace, character arc - all dank.

PROS

• MC has a phat ass

CONS

• writing - felt like a child wrote it
• MC model render - suddenly just changes to an ugly unfinished model
• obnoxious music - repetitive action music

Work on writing skills and plot points, that would be a start for this VN. Also clean up MC's god awful model skin (post cave scene) .

I love this game.
I really liked her story and the way it flows.
I believe the rest of the game will have bigger surprises.
The rest should last longer and work better with the contrast and colors of the game. Keep it up bro.

I would really like to give it more and it has potential to be 3 stars but not atm.

Pros:
- character quality is good
- female protagonist
- girl looks sexy
- story has potential
- music is ok

Cons:
-background is too busy, strange and in a too heavy contrast
- english is really not the best xD
- really really short release version!
(baba dies? but i hoped to have incest with him optional )
- every character comes and goes far too quick better for a comic atm

I feel sorry for myself because I gave to this game few MB on my hard drive.
Objectively this game is repulsive, from technical point of view and from plot point of view.
I know it can look harsh my review, but the expected standard for games in nowadays are far higher.

My advice is do not download it