Reviewed on 0.1
The writing here is very strong. I really enjoy the pace of how each scene is described, and the author does a great job weaving dialogue in with the scenes.
Cam is an interesting character, and while the pace of the relationship between her and the player character is a little inconsistent the scenes we have in this version already have a lot of very fun chemistry.
I really like the way the player character is portrayed as well (at least in the choices I went through)
All told a very strong start and the writing is top grade.
Will be very exciting to see how this develops, the chemistry between the characters is already coming through very strong in the writing.
The writing here is very strong. I really enjoy the pace of how each scene is described, and the author does a great job weaving dialogue in with the scenes.
Cam is an interesting character, and while the pace of the relationship between her and the player character is a little inconsistent the scenes we have in this version already have a lot of very fun chemistry.
I really like the way the player character is portrayed as well (at least in the choices I went through)
All told a very strong start and the writing is top grade.
Will be very exciting to see how this develops, the chemistry between the characters is already coming through very strong in the writing.