RPGM - Colette's NTR Adventure [v0.1.3D] [SleepDage]

A pretty solid start so far and I'm enjoying the direction this seems to be going with only a few things i feel need tweaking.

The art style is nice, cute characters and some interseting scenes so far. Combat is what you'd expect from a RPGM game but why fix what isn't broken. The story seems to be going in a decent direction as well.

My only real gripe with the game so far is the brothel seems to be a bit overly grindy, requiring numerous visits to get the next part of a dance seems excessive to me especially when there are multiple dance moves split between exotic and pole. The game is still in its early days so there is time for that to change.

For me this is a very good game, even though it is still in its early stages.

The art is very nice, and the animations look good as well

The way that repeatable scenes are unlocked, is very straightforward once you figure out that it is just based on stats (corruption, love and beast)
But it was a bit confusing at first, and feels a bit too grindy, which the normal ways to increase stats.

The stats can be bought from a vendor though, which is nice, as it removes some of the grind.
But killing enki can get a bit repetitive as the only form of getting money early on.

Overall I really liked the game, and though it has flaws, I think it is very very good for being early in development.

5/5 In my subjective opinion.

First Impression (v0.1.3D):
The game is great overall! The art style is really well done and visually appealing. The coin system seems like a solid mechanic, but it's a bit unclear how to use it effectively—some guidance or tutorials would help. The monster gameplay feels a little slow at times, which could use some tweaking for better pacing. I'd also love to see more content in the future, like armor, magical items, and other gear to customize the experience even more.

Aside the art that i guess is somewhat subjective (way too 'curvy' to the point its more in the FAT territory), the game is too buggy and raw, keeps crashing, and is horribly grindy, slow and tedious for absolutely no reason, implementing such amazing things as a fade in and out screen that lasts over a second and during which you can't move, which might not sound like a lot until you realize just how much of these transitions you need to go through for the wandering events and general movement around the map for quests and the brothel minigame. Then they give you a horse for it to shorten the travel time... Cool i guess? Would be way fking better if you didn't need to watch a 5+ second cutscene of its balls and the heroine's ass every time you mounted it though, which makes fast travel almost unnecessary because you can walk half the fking distance you're fast traveling to town in that time! Oh, and even 'better', the FIRST fast travel option isn't even TO town where you need to go repeatedly, oh no, its to the far side of the forest where there's absolutely NOTHING to do aside the couple quests you probably already did and that take a fraction of the time of the other grinds!

So, guess what, if you wanna go to the brothel, you better not rush it and remember to press down every single time, because otherwise you'll end up in the forest after watching the unskipabble horse balls, then will have to fast travel back (which is thankfully without that), and then watch the balls AGAIN to go to town! And where does it teleport you? A screen away from the brothel, with the fountain in your way, so you'll need to navigate AROUND it, then wait for the screen fade in and out, talk to the guard, hear the WHOLE DIALOGUE fully again (another common theme with this shitty game), which is something you'll need to suffer through about 40 TIMES, and considering how long a procedure that is, that ALONE is AT LEAST a HOUR of shitty rpg walking, a quarter of it staring at horse balls! What JOY! And about as much time you'll waste on the strip minigame that'll have you watch the same exact two battles 20 times each, unlocking 4-5 more images as you go that you'll be staring at, bored out of your mind for an hour or two while you fast forward this garbage as much as you can, averaging something like 1 new image every 4-6 minutes, which is too sad to even call it a slide show at this point... How do you EVEN MANAGE TO RUIN A STRIP SHOW??

Overall, if the game wasn't made like ass, even with the questionable art and girl body build choice, it could be enjoyable, some scenes where enjoyable even for me regardless of said art... But again, the actual gameplay is horribly tedious and unenjoyable, getting a 100% save is a MUST, because the creator hates you, and probably themselves. Which i guess is to be expected for an NTR and fat chick enthusiast, but hey, i'm not judging, just wanna bash this guy's head in with a brick to end his suffering and inflicting suffering on others with his horrible game 'mechanics'

glad to see games are using depictions of the female character doing things on their own. I would like to see more diversity in the art but its good no.

the gameplay is pretty good, but not too much to comment on since there isnt a lot in the game at the moment. but i do like this game and have high hopes for the dev.

art is great story is really funny really wish the devs doesnt abandon it and keeps going on with story so far recommended and good luck on the project!

will follow and watch it for further updates if things go steady will certainly sub

Version 0.1.1B

Pros
+ Nice artwork
+ Good ideas for mechanics with the options for her to wander, stay at home, or work at home, and good attempt at using erotic combat mechanics.

Cons
- Very early stages and has barely any content despite multiple updates
- Unpolished stuff such as colettes armour not updating during the battles where you lose armour hit points. Only after battle does it visually update.
- Same thing with slash animation not matching visually to current state of armour
- Wandering ntr events cannot be found in a physical location


Neutral
-- Story is serviceable but barebones.


Very overrated for what it offers. Score might improve if further updates are substantial but it is unlikely to.

Score: 2.5/5

Game is very promising. Hopefully we can add pubic hair for her in the future.
Otherwise, excellent animation/art. I really can't say anything else since the game is still in early developement but considering it's early stage it looks solid.

Still really new so I can't full give a 5 out of 5 but a 4 for how solid it is in this early state. Got a good hint on how the mechanics will play out, with corruption and armor break.

The design for Colette is fantastic, maybe not directly shortstack but definitely gives off that vibe, just generally a really cute/toony design.

A lot of promise, can't wait to see more

As it stands currently it is a very promising alpha version.
The character is thick which you either love or hate. It has corruption which makes the game more interesting to play, gives it nice progression and pairs really well with the NTR aspect.

The first animation feels a bit lackluster, and I wish that combat was quicker and that Colette didn't 100% block combat H after the first time until corruption increases, maybe make it like 50%.

It has its flaws but it's only a V0.1 so I think it's too soon to focus on the negatives unless they are actually game-breaking or ruining the story.

also: please fix the armor break art not updating until you use the swing and the fact that you hit before the swing animation instead of after

Easily a 1 out of 5. I don't see any potential, and the passive-aggressive way the dev begs for money is EXTREMELY greedy and offputting.

He begs for money at every damn opportunity, always saying stuff like: "Due to lack of funding, this area is not completed."
Dude, go work a normal job and work on this as your damn hobby, or at least release a real game before demanding money.

Also, there is an object in the game that sparkles and is essentially just an aggressive way of demanding a donation. Even tries to make you feel bad.

Really creepy.

Okay, enough about the begging; let's review the game. If the game is good, all can be forgiven.

Art: The art is inspired, and unique. Is it good? No. It's mediocre. The proportions are way off, the face does not fit the personality of the FC, and the tiny, minuscule amount of art in the game is just meh.
2 / 5

Story: Shittiest generic story I have ever read. Beyond hope. It's blatantly dumb, stupid, nonsensical. Even for a damn RPG maker game. Most MTL translated JP games make more sense than this one. 1 / 5

Writing: Average, shit, low effort. Not the worst, but nothing stands out Some extra lore, some people might care about. 2.5 / 5

Gameplay: ABSOLUTE GARBAGE. The game and system are LAGGY AF. You fight against deers using a damn ATTACK SPAM fighting style, with unfinished combat. Also, you can't even spam attack because the FC has no attack, but you have to use "Slash" instead, which is tedious AF. This is the WORST, ABSOLUTE WORST RPG maker mechanic I have ever seen. This would have been shit 30 years ago. Absolute peak trash. 0/5

So overall? 1 / 5 - I can't say a single good thing about the game. I tried to like it, but it's just that bad. I am sorry! This is coming from someone who actually wasted a good amount of time on it.

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Played the new update because I want to update my Review:

Armor still lasts WAY TOO LONG
Battles are still insanely shitty, it's a joke. SLOW CLUNKY JUST ATTACK ATTACK ATTACK - DESPITE LVL UPS!
Animations with full armor are shown despite Colette having no or broken armor.
No event/reaction even when she's walking around naked.....
Even when she is naked, her sprite avatar on the map is shown wearing armor. Lazy you did not even bother with the details.
Enkis use Armor to break even when Colette is naked. Sometimes, 3 times repeatedly. BAD CODING. You can improve the damn AI. Did you even bother with it?
When battles start, the custom battle track is delayed, and the original track plays for a split second.The H scene with the male Enki makes no sense... absolutely! also that's not what I'd consider "pinning down". Also it's so hard to even get pinned down, and even when you do get pinned down there is a large chance that Colette just escapes... Man this design. Out of 10 tries the Enki succeeded ONCE. ONCE!
If you sleep with damn broken armor you get a game over, nah also getting it WITH clothes. Dev you suck at this whole process.

This is the WORST GAME I HAVE EVER SEEN. SOMEHOW IT'S GOTTEN EVEN WORSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Many things to say about this game, even in pre beta versions you can see the quality of the artist's draw, that's an important part of many HRPGM just playing this took me back to games like Karryns Prision or Amazon's games and of course the tags are my favorites so for me is a 10/10 hope to see more of it worth to put the money on it

The art for Colette is really good especially on the destruction of her Armor and her combat animation. This is clearly the first version of the game as the content is limited 3 scenes with a guard check, naked guard check and naked blacksmith chat, all using basically the same CG’s. I would rate the game higher but in its current state it does have a number of noticeable issues.

There are a number of bugs and other issue I have encountered;

• Clipping thought the tress and walls south of your house
• Random Game crashes when moving to new areas/transition (uncommon)
• Minor grammar and spelling errors
• Having to click the bed twice to enable first sleep, Fixed
• Having to sleep twice to restore MC’s HP Fixed

Other notes/suggestions:

• I’m not sure why you need 2 types of currency, especially when one resets each day, Fixed
• Not being able to restore Colette’s HP outside of feeding her food make combat quite annoying especially with bad RNG. Fixed
• Not having a way to toggle Colette’s character model when she’s following you makes navigating more annoying that it needs to be. Fixed
• No nude or damaged combat animation sprites exist to reflect armor status

The premise of the game is quite promising coupled with great artwork; I really look forward to what the dev does with this game.

Update v0-1-2e.:

Each update has provided a decent amount of new content with the same amazing art style. The world has been expanded and the writing even if it can feel inconsistent with characters actions at times, continues to be engaging. However, having played through the game multiple time now I have noticed a couple of glaring issues:

Firstly, the game is becoming very grindy and lacking QOL features to offset this, this is most prevalent in the brothel, but also existing in the bathhouse scenes and when breaking armour. For the Brothel you must complete the same “dance” (fight) multiple time to unlock a new “move” (scene) and after each dance you must walk home sleep and walk back. Doing this same process over 20 timers just to unlock the pole dance and do the same thing again.

Secondly, the RNG aspect of scenes is both frustrating and hurts the player experience. This is tied into how corruption works. As it is a single value, if Colette has a high corruption from 1 type of event it means when new non-linear content is added you are required to do the same event over and over never knowing if you have seen all the new scenes/content. As more content is added this will only become more annoying.

Overall, the game is moving in a positive direction I just hope the Dev can balance the game better going forward.

In my opinion, it has good potential. I like the design of the protagonist, and I also enjoy the mechanic where she loses her clothes during combat. I hope the NTR focuses more on humans and is the kind where the protagonist doesn’t know about it. I’m not a big fan of protagonists who enjoy being cheated on

Muy buen juego,las mecánica de la ropa es muy interesante,el arte de la mujer es muy bonito y su diseño inusual(me encanto)
La historia en este tipo de juegos no es muy relevante al final así que se agradece una historia fluida y dinámica
Espero próximas actualizaciones porque considero que tiene mucho potencial y estoy ansioso de ver hasta donde llega
Espero que en el futuro hayan mecánicas con la granja y pudo haber sido problema de mi dispositivo pero note cierto "lag" después de usar la cama para dormir un par de veces


ENG Translation of Review:

Very good game, the clothing mechanics are very interesting, the art of the woman is very pretty and her design is unusual (I loved it) The story in this type of games is not very relevant in the end so a fluid and dynamic story is appreciated. I look forward to future updates because I consider that it has a lot of potential and I am eager to see how far it goes. I hope that in the future there are mechanics with the farm and it could have been a problem with my device but I noticed some "lag" after using the bed to sleep a couple of times.

this game Colette's Adventure has a lot of potential. This game has a very simple story at the moment but with further development I can see it branching out to a variety of different and fun scenarios.