[v0.9]
Script:
⠀⠀⠀The protagonist is so clueless, it hurts, physically. Like he doesn't realize that someone's wife in cheating right in front of him or that his childhood friend was all over him for years, or when a housewife and caravan girl are basically throwing themselves at him.
⠀⠀⠀Cindy who is main LI is a huge pervert, it's basically her main character trait and all she ever thinks about is sex. The OP states that main fetishes are netori and sharing, but in reality it more like netori and cuckquean with optional sharing, because you can refuse sharing Cindy, but can't refuse her constantly setting you up with and seducing other girls, most of whom are already in relationships.
! the only woman that can be exclusive to MC is Cindy, all other women WILL be shared, e.g. even after making Wendy his servant MC still makes her suck a bunch of stranger's cocks and it's out of players control !
⠀⠀⠀Setting is weird amalgamation of medieval fantasy and modern urban fantasy. Like it's medieval for the most part, but then we see stuff like showers, smartphones with NFC, modern clothes and vibrators, all of which doesn't really fit the time period.
⠀⠀⠀The overall quality of writing is actually alright. The dev is clearly more focused on erotic/porn sections rather than trying to tell a compelling story as the main plot is not interesting nor original. The porn stuff however is fairly competently written. The pacing is also great - there is never a boring moment, the reader is constantly engaged.
⠀⠀⠀On a side note here are some misc. complaints: there are grammar errors and typos; the dialogue lines are often attributed to the wrong speaker.
Graphics:
⠀⠀⠀The AI art is sloppy, we've got it all: unsettling faces, background details look like splodge, inconsistent looking characters, 45 y/o look like 25 (because magic??), six fingers, etc. Not a lot of imagery to match the text. We are often either staring at a background or a straight up black screen.
⠀⠀⠀The porn here is a mixed bag. The dialogue is naughty, there is a set up, the ladies are pretty, the pirctures are ok. What turned me off a lot is that all sex scenes are missing climax. That's like Erotica 101, how could you fucked that up? No animations in the first half of the novel, unless you count rare 2-3 frame gifs as animation that is. Later on dev added animations of varying quality, mostly on the lower spectrum. The collage of images that starts to grow as the scene propresses is a gretty unique idea, but I don't like it, fullscreen panels look better.
*Sounds are bugged, in a sense that some audio tracks don't turn off when they should.
Playtime: 6-7 hours