Ren'Py - Abandoned - Columbia [v0.12] [Three Foxes]

This game is great, in my opinion. Beth can be prostitute her self for money to accomplishe her goal. The story is interstinting.

Good:
1) She can choise be corrupted or not.
2) Work to make money.
3) Nun, is very cool.
4) Make friend with a prostitute in the brothel.

Bad very bad decision in the sistem:
1) Game Over when we choise to not lissen to advise. Too bad very bad. This is Game Over. In prolog she can fight the enemy or spy conversetion to the police corrupted. Only two choie in prolog, jamp to vortex. Where isother option to make, exemple make a fighe or stunning the enemies, for go out without incidents?
2) Game Over in the past? I think this will loss hope to play this game or continue to play it. Only two difficult? To bad i Pfer see mor of difficult levels to play without game over. The game will end game very very tooo fast. this is very veri bad

Pretty good premise, decent art, like the use of original game score, writing needs a bit of work, but it's better than most engrish games... I booed when it ended... what a terrible place to end it... like half a bj... I guess what I'm trying to say is that I want more of this.