VN - Ren'Py - Coming of the Storms [v0.1] [Mr.Nonnypants]

  1. 3.00 star(s)

    SAFFID

    I really like the chosen animation style. The characters look distinctly singular. Clarence has that awesome American Dad look! :cool:

    Art:
    The CGs can be a little inconsistent at times, but that's the downside of AI generated images (believe me, I know). Some of the images during sexual scenes are cut off awkwardly at the sides. I understand why and how that happens. It's quite the limitation for a creator to solely use PNG images for all scenes. Making an AI generator create landscape jpg images instead, would be my suggestion. It would most likely create inconsistencies when it comes to the backgrounds during the sexual scenes, but I would still choose this route.

    Writing:
    It's written in an ambitious novelist style. I admire the effort wholeheartedly. The writer clearly has an acute understanding of language. However, it does get a bit too environmentally descriptive for my liking. But that's simply a question of preference.

    The game is still in really early development, but it's one I will keep my eye on.

    My initial rating would be 2 out of 5. But I've learned, that when reviewing a story that are in such an early stage, you should always add an extra star or two to your rating. Grading a game low at the start can be harsh and unfair, given that the developer hasn't even had a chance to show where the story might be headed. And besides, a higher rating helps draw more eyes to the project.

    ;)
  2. 3.00 star(s)

    alandavis

    V0.1 Rating
    Its OK so far, obviously a o.1 release doesn't have a ton of content. but whats there is engaging at least. the AI art is fairly consistent throughout, though there are some sections that could use a little tweaking to keep consistency. the biggest quality drop comes in the form of the typos and a few jumps in logic for the characters but with reviews and revisions that can easily change too. all in all I'm going to keep an eye on this one and update the review as it goes along.