Ahh, brings me back to a nostalgic time when I loved reading and writing indulgent stories like this.
Premises and lore draws you in almost immediately, and well thought out. There's a clear direction and idea of where and how the story is going. Credit to the writer definitely.
NSFW scenes are always yes or no, and while the choices matter, they don't create multiple branches that locks you out in the future, which you can't say the same about every other game here, so that's a big plus.
However, the engine used is unfortunately one of the oldest. Though I assume that's for the ease of animation, it kinda takes away from the "cinematics".
Direction of the action scenes are surprisingly good, even on a old engine, same as above, ideas well thought out, but the quality is abit lacking.
One of those games where you can probably remove the lewd scenes and sell it as a VN and still be very successful. The actual 'kink' factor isn't that high. Sex scenes could almost be considered boring, though the characters actually look quite good despite using old program.
All in all, it's really only limited by the renders, 9.5/10 as an fantasy-action VN. but probably only a 6.5 or 7 as a lewd game.
Still, looking forward to more content as the story is honestly quite addicting, would probably be an amazing remaster using one of the newer engines/program for renders. (Though it would suck to slow down the production of the story)
Great work Berkili4!