What argument does this have? Do you just insert a few gifs downloaded from the internet and that's it? Work on the script a little, make it make a little sense.
If it is a visual novel in HTML, at least the writing is expected to be minimally correct, to have some coherence. If it has helped you learn, great, but if what you want is something else, you have two options: the first is to improve the argument, there is none! A children's story is quantum more complex than this and the second; If you are not good at writing, collaborate with someone who is better at writing.
I'm sorry but I found it really TERRIBLE.
If it is a visual novel in HTML, at least the writing is expected to be minimally correct, to have some coherence. If it has helped you learn, great, but if what you want is something else, you have two options: the first is to improve the argument, there is none! A children's story is quantum more complex than this and the second; If you are not good at writing, collaborate with someone who is better at writing.
I'm sorry but I found it really TERRIBLE.