Review of version 0.02a
This self-described demo is a rough cut to be sure, but it could improve with some hard work. The sex happens fast and with very little set-up. Hopefully, there will be a build-up in later versions. Teasing is being set-up with the step-daughters and works better.
There isn't much plot set-up and what there is doesn't make a lot of sense. It's called Corrupted Island, but a mad scientist has accidentally created a horny drug that will make everyone want to fuck? Seems redundant. Maybe this will go somewhere interesting. We'll see.
Renders are decent and I love Honey Select so no complaints there. One chick has orange nipples and I'm actually looking forward to more of her.
The script needs a major rewrite. Lots of awkward phrasing and dialogue that seems like it was written by a kid. Docking someone a year and a half of salary for a lab accident? Lol, only someone who has never held a job could write something so absurd. That's not how employment works.
Not recommended at the moment, but I will check back on later versions.
This self-described demo is a rough cut to be sure, but it could improve with some hard work. The sex happens fast and with very little set-up. Hopefully, there will be a build-up in later versions. Teasing is being set-up with the step-daughters and works better.
There isn't much plot set-up and what there is doesn't make a lot of sense. It's called Corrupted Island, but a mad scientist has accidentally created a horny drug that will make everyone want to fuck? Seems redundant. Maybe this will go somewhere interesting. We'll see.
Renders are decent and I love Honey Select so no complaints there. One chick has orange nipples and I'm actually looking forward to more of her.
The script needs a major rewrite. Lots of awkward phrasing and dialogue that seems like it was written by a kid. Docking someone a year and a half of salary for a lab accident? Lol, only someone who has never held a job could write something so absurd. That's not how employment works.
Not recommended at the moment, but I will check back on later versions.
