HTML - Onhold - Corrupting a Nun [v0.08b] [Sinaxxr]

nice artwork, while the storyline is a little bit short but I truly like the feeling to corrupt the nun, It's a pity that for some reasons I can't find a way to support the dev. hope to have the chance to see next update.

I love this game. Man I wish the concept of corrupting girls online is more popular. This game is really nice. Theirs nothing bad about it except later on please make an android port of you can. The pc one works but some of the screen doesn't fit although it doesn't really impact the story since it's like the corner of the wall.

Generally when a game is textbased or has weak art, you expect the rest of the Venn diagram to take up the slack with a really good story with strong choice paths and character development, something that really plays into the text-based medium and the creative freedom it offers... This game doesn't have that.

It's an entirely linear sexting simulator where you roleplay as a horny Indian man trying to get a nun to show her bob and vagene on her bible help teleconference. There's some thin excuse why she doesn't block you instantly, and it turns into a shallow corruptor thing where no one has any agency about the direction it takes. And, though this is excusable since it's still early in, there's barely even any bob and vagene to be seen for how shallowly horny of a game it is.

Pretty much any casual reader can probally think of half a dozen good path ideas for a premise like this; the sympathetic virgin she wants to help, the chad guy she develops a crush for, the slow-burn genuine romance path, the no-porn innocent path where she actually fixes you, the dark blackmail path, etc. All things that would have some characterization and relationship path potential behind them, instead of just sending her dick picks and 'show tits pls' and it somehow working.

I will give it some props for the chat interface idea and having any art at all, it's more than some of these where the author literally just dumps their short story into a default twine interface, but unfortunatly as said before, it doesn't really take advantage of it and there's nothing here that makes it more than just a short story. Maybe, and hopefully, this can change in the future though as the author expands it.

Also, and this is likely pedantic, but nuns are monastics that live in secluded communities of other nuns, not local small town community churches. What you're more likely to find out in the world are apostolic sisters, which though similar to nuns, are mission-orientated and take different vows. I recognize the marketting value of just calling her a nun for the title, but if the author wants some free worldbuilding detail for the actual game, there ya go.

i beat this game in 10 minutes, there is nothing here. the dialogue is pretty bland and the art is fine i guess, but it does nothing for me. everyone is unattractive and the mc is just a weirdo, unfappable.

Not really getting the hype for this one or where all the 5 star reviews are coming from. There's some potential in the concept but very limited content so far, as of 0.07a this is no where close being a 5 star game.

Art Style 3/5
It's unique if on the somewhat minimalist side of things, it could certainly work for a whole game though it's not going to be the selling point.

Writing 2/5
The writing we get is not bad in terms of spelling or grammar or anything, but as a matter of storytelling it's rather devoid of subtlety. The player character basically starts off on the first day opening with ' My dick is hard', or 'Show me your tits' and for some reason this entirely chaste and innocent nun puts up with it and keeps talking with him tomorrow for more of the same.

Content 1/5
There is no branching at all. Selecting different options will get you different responses (sometimes) but day to day the game is completely linear, no choices you make one day seem to have any effect on how things will go on any other day. And there are no other gameplay mechanics, stats, inventory, travel system or anything like that, so aside from the chat choices there's nothing about clicking through scenes to even make this a game. Basically it really needs the choices to mean something otherwise it's not even a choose your own adventure story, it's just a linear comic strip you have to click through.

Additionally as mentioned the content available so far is quite short, depending on your reading speed this game should take you between 5 and 10 minutes to reach the end of the current version.

Well, I really enjoyed the game, and speaking a bit about it, the game shows a lot of potential. I loved the visuals and the storytelling approach. I eagerly await updates; I hope it can be successfully completed. : D

Another proof that the main thing is not graphics, not gigabytes of photos and videos, not a super engine, but words and correctly designated emotions.
The plot is simple, there is intrigue, the characters have personalities.
The nun is cute.

Very original game. Like the history . Art is good too. Hope the update will be each month. Good Job. Can't wait for next update. We need more games like this with original art. What will be the next gift

I'm rating v0.06 of the game:
Really great game so far and interesting idea. I don't think I saw any game like that yet. There's quite a bit of feet content too, for those liking it.

I'm a real sucker for slow corruption games. Especially those that don't focus on too many characters and this game delivers.

Can't wait for future updates.

really funny writing and memes. love the premise of the game.
Art looks nice too, not much content yet but im excited for future releases. Cant wait to see more interactins between MC and Mary.

also mechanically the animated sequences are really well done, the games UI looks good and feels nice.

A fascinating web chat based visual novel with a hand drawn charm.

Right now content wise there isn't much, but you could see a skeleton of a great text based game with a potential of different routes and ending leading to having a pretty good amount of replayable value.

That's the what if anyway, if we want to look at something good that is solid in the game it's our female lead Mary, she captures the beauty of a sheltered girl that has curiosity and her reaction to our advances perfectly capture that fantasy.

The only con that I have is MC being a bit crude, but that's my POV and a game can't capture everyone perspective.

A genuinely good concept that has the potential to be REALLY good with polish

Pros:
-FMC that's resistant to anything sexual, but is also so pent up that you can see her stumble easily
-Potential for differing routes
-Livestream chats in games are always rare
-FMC seems REAL. She acts the way a normal person would, and doesn't get too bimbofied by "porn logic". Sure, she's naive, but even that naivety is realistic as it's backed up by suspicion. She has her own flaws that makes her interesting

Cons:
-VERY short atm. Like, maybe 5-10 minutes of reading. On that note, EXTREMELY little nudity.
-Art could be better, it's a bit plain atm.
-Choices right now are a bit linear with mild differences, like the whole "illusion of free choice" meme thats going around.
-The plot is extremely straightforward, making it essentially a kinetic novel.
-While the FMC acts very realistic, the MC himself has "pornbrain". There's no intelligence, just horny. It'd be nice to see him plan his conversations out to corrupt her with intelligence, instead of being "YO HERE'S MA DICK" and having the nun fall for it.

Overall, there are a ton of flaws I would love to see get patched with time, but I'm very excited for this! I would heavily recommend downloading just to check out the concept, and then keep it on your watchlist to see it's development.

A brilliant scrappy underdog.

This is that case where you look at the art and on one hand you know it could be much, much better and on the other, there's one aspect, the most important aspect, in which it is already just. Perfect.

That shows that the dev has the priorities 100% correct.

There's no fluff, there isn't even a substantial plot, no secondary characters. It's just Sister Mary and you, chatting. This game is all about dialogue. Corrupting a Nun is essentially not a Visual Novel, but a Visual Screenplay. And it executes the idea flawlessly; the dialogue is funny and snappy. And the art, that one key aspect that it does exceptionally well is lively facial expressions. Which is exactly the supplement any dialogue needs (short of professional voice acting) to become super convincing. Bravo.

In conclusion, this is a game that almost every other adult game dev must play to learn two things: how good dialogue looks like, and how out of all the elements that make an adult game, diverse facial expressions have the highest ROI.

But yeah, this game is not for coomers.

I love the premise of chat with camera and simple drawing style that adds a lot to the story. It's refreshing to see this among all 3d games where we wait months to get a bunch of renders, often attached to repeatable boring story. Here the nun is very lively due to many mimic expressions and story is fun so far. I like that only harm was done on divine prejudices of corrupted nun and I hope that game will maintain positive atmosphere.

Pretty good job so far with nice art and cool idea. Art is simple but expressive and does the job more than enough. Looking forward to new updates since there is almost no content as of 0.04. Could really use a big update to lay the foundations

Very unique take on the corruption genre. The character writing is well done and the progression is not rushed so it feels more believable. Each interaction is pretty short, which meant I got invested very quickly. Would recommend this game and I'm very much looking forward to more.

So far, so good - nice writing, cute art! The corruption arc is not too pronounced as it often is in these games and the pace feels about right although maybe it could stand to be slowed a little, this is a minor observation. Not a huge amount to see just now but I will definitely be keeping an eye on this as it develops.
Keep up the good work, dev!

Even though it is very simplistic; it takes little to no commitment and has great writing. You will definitely laugh (possibly cry depending on how religious you are). A sign of a great game....you will say "AWWWWW" when you reach the end of content message.

This one is hella fun. I went through most options. It is simple but sweet. Thank you dev.
Art: Unique
Story: Great
Animations: none
Sex: none yet
Anal: none yet
GamePlay: FUN!

Once complete it will be a gem of a game.

A pretty fantastic start.

I hope her corruption will take some time as opposed to being unrealistically quick and short.
The art style is cute. It's simple, and it doesn't take too much time away from developing a story, plus it's easy to edit and/or replace.