A great short novel.
The author revised the beginning two or three times, but overall it didn’t get worse.
The story develops quite quickly.
However, I would suggest the author make the start of the relationship between Him and Her more gradual.
Right now it comes across as: “let’s start dating quickly, while my old grandfather is still of sound mind and ready to give me all his inheritance if I meet a girl and marry her.”
Alternatively, the prologue could begin not at the point where they just meet, but when they’ve already been seeing each other for a month or two. Then the events can unfold naturally. That way, her impatience can be justified more easily — for example, due to exams or tests, they barely had time for short dates. And she’s a patient girl, but not made of steel.
But that’s just me nitpicking. I like your story, Bulik98.
Five stars

The author revised the beginning two or three times, but overall it didn’t get worse.
The story develops quite quickly.
However, I would suggest the author make the start of the relationship between Him and Her more gradual.
Right now it comes across as: “let’s start dating quickly, while my old grandfather is still of sound mind and ready to give me all his inheritance if I meet a girl and marry her.”
Alternatively, the prologue could begin not at the point where they just meet, but when they’ve already been seeing each other for a month or two. Then the events can unfold naturally. That way, her impatience can be justified more easily — for example, due to exams or tests, they barely had time for short dates. And she’s a patient girl, but not made of steel.
But that’s just me nitpicking. I like your story, Bulik98.
Five stars