It's pretty bad, but it's probably marginally better than his other two 'efforts'.
The initial build up of the incest angle works ok, but then he just discards it in favour of girls being obsessed with big cocks.
Also, I'm pretty sure it's not their own work. Looks pretty heavily plagiarised from this Literotica story. https://www.literotica.com/s/a-sister-surprise.
This is a pirate site, so I'm not commenting on the act of plagiarizing, but if you're not going to do the work, you could at least credit the person who did. Although, considering how badly they bastardised the story, I'm not sure the author would want anything to do with it now!
This is an example of how to take a hot story, and make it, not.
The initial build up of the incest angle works ok, but then he just discards it in favour of girls being obsessed with big cocks.
Also, I'm pretty sure it's not their own work. Looks pretty heavily plagiarised from this Literotica story. https://www.literotica.com/s/a-sister-surprise.
This is a pirate site, so I'm not commenting on the act of plagiarizing, but if you're not going to do the work, you could at least credit the person who did. Although, considering how badly they bastardised the story, I'm not sure the author would want anything to do with it now!
This is an example of how to take a hot story, and make it, not.