I don't often review other dev's work, but this deserves some attention. I may be biased since this is a kinetic VN (and I am primarily a kinetic dev myself).
With that out of the way, I have to say that Cosy Creator does a lot here that I can learn from, especially in the character development department. Wow, you can truly see the difference in each girl. So much so that if you didn't look at the name or the image, and just read what is said, you'd pretty much know who said it.
Someone else mentioned the few facial expressions used for the girls. I do have to agree with that because expressions are really important in an AVN. And with such a well developed set of characters, this little detail can be a big let down for some. I got used to it I guess because I enjoyed the story so much. But, if I had one gripe, it would just be to please at least have the girls open their mouth in the pose if they are speaking. It just feels weird. While it's true you can get used to experiencing the story like this, it does kinda break the flow a little.
Graphics-wise, it looks fine. I feel like the eyes on the girls could be set back just a bit more. From the side, some of them can almost look a little bug-eyed. It isn't a serious issue, just an observation.
Honestly, I don't care about any of that because the story is so well written, I'm mainly focused on that. The banter back and forth between different characters is well placed and well done, and fitting coming from various characters. Again, if you just read the dialogue without seeing the names or the render, you would pretty much know who is talking. That to me is great character development. Yes I know, I need to better at this myself.
The beginning can be a little slow to start but sticking with it, it does start to take off and feed you the story at a decent pace. Pacing is the other thing I like with this one.
As for the MC's behavior, I'm inclined to forgive the masochistic content here because at least every girl knows that they can say no at any time. Someone else called it 'rapey'. I disagree 100%. There is absolutely nothing 'rapey' about this story. Nothing. Sure, it might seem a little rough sometimes, but everything is consented to properly. So, no rape here.
I think the MC acts mostly honorably. Although I myself would not be the type to do some of the things he does (I've never thought of spanking as any kind of turn on), it really isn't that big a deal when the girl really is getting off on it. Especially one character who practically begs for it daily. Outside of a few things he says or does that I don't agree with, he's well enough written for the story that is being told.
Great little game, well written story, excellent character development. More facial expressions and opened mouths when they're talking. I still give this 5 stars. It's just that good.
With that out of the way, I have to say that Cosy Creator does a lot here that I can learn from, especially in the character development department. Wow, you can truly see the difference in each girl. So much so that if you didn't look at the name or the image, and just read what is said, you'd pretty much know who said it.
Someone else mentioned the few facial expressions used for the girls. I do have to agree with that because expressions are really important in an AVN. And with such a well developed set of characters, this little detail can be a big let down for some. I got used to it I guess because I enjoyed the story so much. But, if I had one gripe, it would just be to please at least have the girls open their mouth in the pose if they are speaking. It just feels weird. While it's true you can get used to experiencing the story like this, it does kinda break the flow a little.
Graphics-wise, it looks fine. I feel like the eyes on the girls could be set back just a bit more. From the side, some of them can almost look a little bug-eyed. It isn't a serious issue, just an observation.
Honestly, I don't care about any of that because the story is so well written, I'm mainly focused on that. The banter back and forth between different characters is well placed and well done, and fitting coming from various characters. Again, if you just read the dialogue without seeing the names or the render, you would pretty much know who is talking. That to me is great character development. Yes I know, I need to better at this myself.
The beginning can be a little slow to start but sticking with it, it does start to take off and feed you the story at a decent pace. Pacing is the other thing I like with this one.
As for the MC's behavior, I'm inclined to forgive the masochistic content here because at least every girl knows that they can say no at any time. Someone else called it 'rapey'. I disagree 100%. There is absolutely nothing 'rapey' about this story. Nothing. Sure, it might seem a little rough sometimes, but everything is consented to properly. So, no rape here.
I think the MC acts mostly honorably. Although I myself would not be the type to do some of the things he does (I've never thought of spanking as any kind of turn on), it really isn't that big a deal when the girl really is getting off on it. Especially one character who practically begs for it daily. Outside of a few things he says or does that I don't agree with, he's well enough written for the story that is being told.
Great little game, well written story, excellent character development. More facial expressions and opened mouths when they're talking. I still give this 5 stars. It's just that good.