Played Version: 0.9. Played until ingame-day 16.
Summary:
MC inherits a mixed-purpose property from his grandfather and mentor, deciding to both move in and start running it as a café/restaurant. He is still a student in the last years of mandatory education, much to his annoyance. Through a series of random events he meets the prospective harem members, who also become employees and in some cases co-inhabitants of the restaurant. A plot involving an aristocratic system of families was hinted at shortly before I stalled reading on day 16. Not the most inspirational plot, but arguably better than the AVN average, which is a rather low standard in the first place. The idea of MC building up a business is a novel and fresh for an AVN, but the overall execution feels a bit shallow. The power fantasy with the noble, benevolent yet clearly dominant MC, is front and center in terms of where the narrative has its attention. Relationships seem to be developing at a breakneck pace, often in a rather contrived fashion and with little rhyme or reason to it. Now that it looks like I actually did write a summary, I’ll end it here and let the Pros, Mehs and Cons do the rest of the work.
Pros:
- Compensating somewhat for the lack of facial expressions, the characters body language is decently expressive.
- You occasionally get some oddly great one liners and comments like “No kidding, that guy is definitely a few noodles short of a stir fry”. It relates to the topic of food being central to the plot and is funny in a random way it doesn’t make sense, yet it still works.
- It’s nice to have a simple day/calender system helping you keep track of things. Something that I would like to see more of in other AVN’s.
- Interactions between girls are done well by harem AVN standards. MC doesn’t feel like the star in a solar system with all other bodies (characters) circling around him. The LI’s have their own social dynamics.
- Grammar, vocabulary and so on are good. The technical side of the writing overall is solid.
Mehs and hit/miss:
- Personally I don’t mind it, but while the girls all have good quality models, they also lean toward looking quite doll and plastic-like. This is a general Honey Select trend, but it feels more pronounced here. Maybe exacerbated by the blank-face issue.
- Well done animations. Loops are smooth. Transitions between loops are as well. The number of loops is also high enough to detail the progression of an H-scene and give some variation. The animations are, however, also very slow. You do not get the impression that the characters are having sex at the pace the text describes. Looking at the movements themselves, it also frequently looked like someone rendered the 2 characters having sex at a fast pace and then simply slowed the animation down to fit the scene, making it look as if you were watching it in slow-motion. This resulted in otherwise natural looking movements ending up looking unnatural.
- Environments are somewhat well set up, but also feel very barren. Big boxy rooms with limited furnishings, plain painted monotone walls and incredibly flat lighting on the surfaces.
- Music could do with a bit more variety. Rather piano heavy as is and it didn’t always fit with the tone and mood of scenes.
- Much of the romantic development felt rushed. I don’t really buy into how and why the LI’s all fall for MC so quickly, especially considering just how deviant he really is. They just readily accept it for no reason. Anything goes, if it is him. You could say they get assimilated into a harem hivemind without any real explanation. It’s as if they know MC is an AVN main character and that is just the way thing are supposed to be.
- Lack of shading on characters and sometimes objects.
- The school uniform makes the male characters look like neanderthals. Short necks and bulky barrel like builds. Other reviewers mentioned it looked like the guys were using big shoulder pads.
- Single-color silhouettes for background characters are ok as a measure to save time and having locations feel populated. But the bright blue and pink colors used for them are too distracting. More subtle colors would be better.
- While I like the MC’s spine, attitude and aspirations, I feel like he is a little but too ahead of his age in terms of those aspirations and his maturity. I don’t really buy into him being 18 years old. 20-21 would be far more believable, regardless of his rough childhood or whatever.
- Yeah, the way this whole maledom thing is being played off, where they essentially roleplay the entire time and being serious in a fake way is most definitely not my thing. Other reviewers have mentioned it being weirdly childlike. Almost like a bunch of 7-10 year olds playing “House”, except for the addition of the sexual undertones.
- MC’s arrogant attitude to school.
- Too much focus on the male power fantasy.
Cons:
- The glaring lack of facial expressions. Especially considering the frequent and awkward close-up camera shots. Most characters have no more than 3 expressions, with a select few characters having more.
- I think that the opening of the restaurant was rushed. It happened to soon and the “running a business” side of things felt heavily simplified to suit the needs of the plot. That is, all the administrative, legal, food safety related stuff.
- Dialogue can occasionally be a little weird sounding. An example being most cases where Lucy says “No way” when receiving a compliment. “No way!” would usually be said when the speaker observes something exciting that is out of the ordinary. Lucy instead uses it to convey simple disbelief at other people’s statements, usually compliments. Lucy has a couple other words or phrases that are used a bit awkwardly.
- For an 18 year old guy who considers himself as mature and noble as MC does, his ability to not start blatantly groping the girls in certain sketchy situations is rather lacking. The logic that is in play here feels distinctly like the logic you typically come across in rapey hentai scenarios. “You gave me a boner so now you have to take responsibility”. This is not the kind of thing that qualifies as Cozy in my world.
- MC’s overall personality is a bit of a double edged sword. Creepster traits mixed seamlessly with otherwise good masculine traits. A sleazebag with noble intentions on a power trip is what he is.
- MC seems subconsciously self-aware of being a harem AVN protag and thus being totally confident in his appeal to women.
- Akatsukis half-naked apprentice outfit is ill suited for her work with food. I have certain neurotic tendencies and have worked in food production. This one bothers me immensely.
- Not THAT much of a bad thing considering that +80% of AVN’s are guilty of it, but once again a magnum dong MC where the dong has magic problem solving properties.
Summary:
MC inherits a mixed-purpose property from his grandfather and mentor, deciding to both move in and start running it as a café/restaurant. He is still a student in the last years of mandatory education, much to his annoyance. Through a series of random events he meets the prospective harem members, who also become employees and in some cases co-inhabitants of the restaurant. A plot involving an aristocratic system of families was hinted at shortly before I stalled reading on day 16. Not the most inspirational plot, but arguably better than the AVN average, which is a rather low standard in the first place. The idea of MC building up a business is a novel and fresh for an AVN, but the overall execution feels a bit shallow. The power fantasy with the noble, benevolent yet clearly dominant MC, is front and center in terms of where the narrative has its attention. Relationships seem to be developing at a breakneck pace, often in a rather contrived fashion and with little rhyme or reason to it. Now that it looks like I actually did write a summary, I’ll end it here and let the Pros, Mehs and Cons do the rest of the work.
Pros:
- Compensating somewhat for the lack of facial expressions, the characters body language is decently expressive.
- You occasionally get some oddly great one liners and comments like “No kidding, that guy is definitely a few noodles short of a stir fry”. It relates to the topic of food being central to the plot and is funny in a random way it doesn’t make sense, yet it still works.
- It’s nice to have a simple day/calender system helping you keep track of things. Something that I would like to see more of in other AVN’s.
- Interactions between girls are done well by harem AVN standards. MC doesn’t feel like the star in a solar system with all other bodies (characters) circling around him. The LI’s have their own social dynamics.
- Grammar, vocabulary and so on are good. The technical side of the writing overall is solid.
Mehs and hit/miss:
- Personally I don’t mind it, but while the girls all have good quality models, they also lean toward looking quite doll and plastic-like. This is a general Honey Select trend, but it feels more pronounced here. Maybe exacerbated by the blank-face issue.
- Well done animations. Loops are smooth. Transitions between loops are as well. The number of loops is also high enough to detail the progression of an H-scene and give some variation. The animations are, however, also very slow. You do not get the impression that the characters are having sex at the pace the text describes. Looking at the movements themselves, it also frequently looked like someone rendered the 2 characters having sex at a fast pace and then simply slowed the animation down to fit the scene, making it look as if you were watching it in slow-motion. This resulted in otherwise natural looking movements ending up looking unnatural.
- Environments are somewhat well set up, but also feel very barren. Big boxy rooms with limited furnishings, plain painted monotone walls and incredibly flat lighting on the surfaces.
- Music could do with a bit more variety. Rather piano heavy as is and it didn’t always fit with the tone and mood of scenes.
- Much of the romantic development felt rushed. I don’t really buy into how and why the LI’s all fall for MC so quickly, especially considering just how deviant he really is. They just readily accept it for no reason. Anything goes, if it is him. You could say they get assimilated into a harem hivemind without any real explanation. It’s as if they know MC is an AVN main character and that is just the way thing are supposed to be.
- Lack of shading on characters and sometimes objects.
- The school uniform makes the male characters look like neanderthals. Short necks and bulky barrel like builds. Other reviewers mentioned it looked like the guys were using big shoulder pads.
- Single-color silhouettes for background characters are ok as a measure to save time and having locations feel populated. But the bright blue and pink colors used for them are too distracting. More subtle colors would be better.
- While I like the MC’s spine, attitude and aspirations, I feel like he is a little but too ahead of his age in terms of those aspirations and his maturity. I don’t really buy into him being 18 years old. 20-21 would be far more believable, regardless of his rough childhood or whatever.
- Yeah, the way this whole maledom thing is being played off, where they essentially roleplay the entire time and being serious in a fake way is most definitely not my thing. Other reviewers have mentioned it being weirdly childlike. Almost like a bunch of 7-10 year olds playing “House”, except for the addition of the sexual undertones.
- MC’s arrogant attitude to school.
- Too much focus on the male power fantasy.
Cons:
- The glaring lack of facial expressions. Especially considering the frequent and awkward close-up camera shots. Most characters have no more than 3 expressions, with a select few characters having more.
- I think that the opening of the restaurant was rushed. It happened to soon and the “running a business” side of things felt heavily simplified to suit the needs of the plot. That is, all the administrative, legal, food safety related stuff.
- Dialogue can occasionally be a little weird sounding. An example being most cases where Lucy says “No way” when receiving a compliment. “No way!” would usually be said when the speaker observes something exciting that is out of the ordinary. Lucy instead uses it to convey simple disbelief at other people’s statements, usually compliments. Lucy has a couple other words or phrases that are used a bit awkwardly.
- For an 18 year old guy who considers himself as mature and noble as MC does, his ability to not start blatantly groping the girls in certain sketchy situations is rather lacking. The logic that is in play here feels distinctly like the logic you typically come across in rapey hentai scenarios. “You gave me a boner so now you have to take responsibility”. This is not the kind of thing that qualifies as Cozy in my world.
- MC’s overall personality is a bit of a double edged sword. Creepster traits mixed seamlessly with otherwise good masculine traits. A sleazebag with noble intentions on a power trip is what he is.
- MC seems subconsciously self-aware of being a harem AVN protag and thus being totally confident in his appeal to women.
- Akatsukis half-naked apprentice outfit is ill suited for her work with food. I have certain neurotic tendencies and have worked in food production. This one bothers me immensely.
- Not THAT much of a bad thing considering that +80% of AVN’s are guilty of it, but once again a magnum dong MC where the dong has magic problem solving properties.