HTML Criminal Seduction [v1.0.2] [MadCoffe]

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You’re a former mobster who, after a series of unfortunate events and already tired of that life, decides to leave everything behind and return to your old hometown, where your family lives—the same family you haven’t seen in four years. And although everything seems normal at first, even after being away for so long, you soon discover that the person you care about most in this world is being threatened and extorted by a criminal organization. With no other choice, you decide to return to your old life and work for the people your loved ones owe money to.​

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Version: 1.0.2
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Language: English
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MadCoffe Congratulations on your first release! Good luck!

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Just one little thing, many people might disagree with what I'm about to say. Too much text on a single page might cause people not to read it at all. Try adding more images between the text and dialogue to break up the amount of text a bit. Also, don't let the video scenes be too long without cuts since it's not possible to speed up the video or skip ahead. I just played for 10 minutes, so, these are my first impressions. The plot seems to be good, but like i said, the amount of text is overwhelming and I didn’t read much of it. Good choice of characters, high hopes for this game!
 
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Ahleanor said:
Just one little thing, many people might disagree with what I'm about to say. Too much text on a single page might cause people not to read it at all. Try adding more images between the text and dialogue to break up the amount of text a bit. Also, don't let the video scenes be too long without cuts since it's not possible to speed up the video or skip ahead. I just played for 10 minutes, so, these are my first impressions. The plot seems to be good, but like i said, the amount of text is overwhelming and I didn’t read much of it. Good choice of characters, high hopes for this game!
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Thank you for the feedback. There's a lot of text at the beginning of the game because I wanted to provide plenty of context—about the main character, the events from his past, and the key characters. In the next update, I’ll see what I can do and try to find the right balance.

As for the long videos (I know some of them are nearly a minute long), I’ll work on standardizing their length to around 20–30 seconds each — or even shorter.
 
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Ahleanor said:
Just one little thing, many people might disagree with what I'm about to say. Too much text on a single page might cause people not to read it at all. Try adding more images between the text and dialogue to break up the amount of text a bit. Also, don't let the video scenes be too long without cuts since it's not possible to speed up the video or skip ahead. I just played for 10 minutes, so, these are my first impressions. The plot seems to be good, but like i said, the amount of text is overwhelming and I didn’t read much of it. Good choice of characters, high hopes for this game!
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I agree with you, there's way too much text ... even for an introduction /storytelling background. About the videos, depending on your browser, if you right click on them and select Show Controls
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... you can speed up/skip the video.

On a personal note, this seemed like a "kinetic novel" , the player being able to just press "Continue" , "Continue" , "Continue" (or whatever word/s moved to the next page of the story) thus being far from a v1.0 imho, more 50-60% of the text I've skipped, it was exhausting to read so much, having to scroll down to the "center of the earth" just to press another "Continue" . The bright white background images will get people blind while trying to read the whole text, I've got eyes strain reading less than half.
The story premise is interesting ( from what I've managed to read ) wish you good luck with the game. I'll give it another try when I'll be able to actually do something in the game. How often do you intend to add more content ?!?
 
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Mwahaha! On this dialogue:

"I've met several like you, and guess what? They were all exactly the same, in other words: an asshole."

Rather than ending that comment with "in other words: an asshole."
It could have been an opportunity to say "in other words, a dick...Dick".
I mean, who knows? He would probably either glare at you with a poker face for like 5 seconds and continue talking about something else, laugh out loud at your comment, or just punch you in the face.
 
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Well I guess in some cases: Dick and Asshole belong together LOL
But, yeah MadCoffe, I too would suggest something about changing the gratuitous white background for story text, to something more mild on the eyes. I'm in my mid 50's and it's a bit too "potent" for these old eyeballs LOL. The story does seem pretty interesting, but yes, try to shorten it some, if possible. BUT, make dang sure that everyone's suggestions don't impede too much in your general scope of the overall game/novel. Make sure your opinion counts in your work. That's really what matters. Because you need to stay happy with your work. Also though with less text, you may free up extra time to do other things to make this project easier for yourself (y)
But, this is just my own opinion. So, do what ya gotta do, in the end to do what ya gotta do (y)
 
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You could slash down on the white wall of text - here, I will help: Remove the word "step" and it's already a lot shorter and 300% better :LOL:
 
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Man, I was this close to turning my life around and then boom - family debt drags me back in like it's a Fast & Furious prequel. Looking forward to the part where I pretend I'm only doing one last job… for the seventh time :LOL:
 
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