Yes of course.Do you intend to add sexual animation to the game in the future, or not!?
The renders and the cool story were good... success in your game.
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- Jan 25, 2020
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So...you shouldn't have 'choices' in the game when you can't possibly have the stats to allow you to take the choice. That's a false choice.
In the current version, even quitting your job still has you continue working at the job. Saying yes to the date with Johan still puts you on a date with Matt.
I would also recommend working on the text and dialog. It doesn't feel very human or interesting at the current time. Potentially find an English writer to work with you on it.
In the current version, even quitting your job still has you continue working at the job. Saying yes to the date with Johan still puts you on a date with Matt.
I would also recommend working on the text and dialog. It doesn't feel very human or interesting at the current time. Potentially find an English writer to work with you on it.
- Feb 2, 2021
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Well i guess that it's just an alpha version of the game. Many things are missing and refer to some non existing options.
It's not a good idea from the dev to just post such an early build, it can just lead to bad review and getting a bad reputation.
Indeed is, I guess I'll leave the post inactive for the moment and I' ll focus on developing the game for a few months.
I hope you guys won't take me as abandoned!
Thanks for the feedback, it is very helpful for me.
usually I like these kind of games but this one feels like it was done by teen who just hit puberty.
You need to refine the dialogs and build in some slower corruption. It's weird for a corruption game to basically on the first 2 days date your coworker, flash your boss and go for prostitution route.
Also the discrepancy between the well done MC and the other guys who look like generic HS characters
You need to refine the dialogs and build in some slower corruption. It's weird for a corruption game to basically on the first 2 days date your coworker, flash your boss and go for prostitution route.
Also the discrepancy between the well done MC and the other guys who look like generic HS characters
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Since I can see you seek feedback - here are my thoughts - first of all quality of renders vary greatly some of your scenes are very nicely done and struck my interest - that was the reason I downloaded the game, but other half appears to be botched. Also you seem to want to go with the story very fast I can see you got prego stuff already. I'm not sure if rushing things is good strategy. You could make with more tease.
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An early build so I'm not going to post a full review but wanted to say a few things.
Regarding the choices, you can do either way, but personally I like to see options locked due to stats. It gives an idea of what else can be changed in a different playthrough.
The renders aren't the best and clearly a result of honey select, but Alyna looks good considering. The animations however are pretty bad, I'd say stop doing them and save the time.
The story is okay, if a little fast. The text could do with some attention but I like that there isn't pages and pages to read. It's functional and unobtrusive and that is good. And it clearly is planning for multiple paths so that is a plus too.
The quality of the English however isn't great so alongside the polish I just mentioned, it could do with some rewrite. Clearly not the dev's first language (Spanish apparently, as there are some left over in Spanish a few times, like 'genial', 'minutos despues', etc...)
Found a bug in the gym path when trying to let yourself being helped, it can't find the correct label.
Overall it looks like it could turn out good in a few updates, depending on where the dev goes with it.
Best of luck.
Regarding the choices, you can do either way, but personally I like to see options locked due to stats. It gives an idea of what else can be changed in a different playthrough.
The renders aren't the best and clearly a result of honey select, but Alyna looks good considering. The animations however are pretty bad, I'd say stop doing them and save the time.
The story is okay, if a little fast. The text could do with some attention but I like that there isn't pages and pages to read. It's functional and unobtrusive and that is good. And it clearly is planning for multiple paths so that is a plus too.
The quality of the English however isn't great so alongside the polish I just mentioned, it could do with some rewrite. Clearly not the dev's first language (Spanish apparently, as there are some left over in Spanish a few times, like 'genial', 'minutos despues', etc...)
Found a bug in the gym path when trying to let yourself being helped, it can't find the correct label.
Overall it looks like it could turn out good in a few updates, depending on where the dev goes with it.
Best of luck.
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I liked the game and see great potential in it. But I think we need to think seriously about the ways of character development. I play through a translator, since English is not my native language and I did not understand the first choice - Agree (Modified Slut path) then a similar choice appears again but not modified, Is that the whore's path is also divided into 2 types?
The choice is excellent. But right at the start of the game there are too many options for further development of the plot. I think we need to decompose these choices of ways for a longer time. I tried to find all the paths in the game with a very large spread according to the result of the choice in the game. It turns out almost different games in one. I think this is too much and it makes little sense to split the game into 5 paths, and in this case you need detailed walkthroughs on separate paths. As a result, I received the result of a pregnant Alina. Playing such games, it is usually intuitively clear which choice leads to what. There is no such thing here. But I couldn't open the event in the toilet of the cafe probably. It also gave an error in one of the options in the gym.
While running game code:
File "game/script.rpy", line 4153, in script
jump gimnasioayudax
ScriptError: could not find label 'gimnasioayudax'.
-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------
Full traceback:
File "game/script.rpy", line 4153, in script
jump gimnasioayudax
File "renpy/ast.py", line 1757, in execute
rv = renpy.game.script.lookup(target)
File "renpy/script.py", line 918, in lookup
raise ScriptError("could not find label '%s'." % str(original))
ScriptError: could not find label 'gimnasioayudax'.
The choice is excellent. But right at the start of the game there are too many options for further development of the plot. I think we need to decompose these choices of ways for a longer time. I tried to find all the paths in the game with a very large spread according to the result of the choice in the game. It turns out almost different games in one. I think this is too much and it makes little sense to split the game into 5 paths, and in this case you need detailed walkthroughs on separate paths. As a result, I received the result of a pregnant Alina. Playing such games, it is usually intuitively clear which choice leads to what. There is no such thing here. But I couldn't open the event in the toilet of the cafe probably. It also gave an error in one of the options in the gym.
While running game code:
File "game/script.rpy", line 4153, in script
jump gimnasioayudax
ScriptError: could not find label 'gimnasioayudax'.
-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------
Full traceback:
File "game/script.rpy", line 4153, in script
jump gimnasioayudax
File "renpy/ast.py", line 1757, in execute
rv = renpy.game.script.lookup(target)
File "renpy/script.py", line 918, in lookup
raise ScriptError("could not find label '%s'." % str(original))
ScriptError: could not find label 'gimnasioayudax'.
This is amazing game for NTR-lovers! Thank you! Did you thought about fertile periods in the pregnancy system?
Cool renders, grammar issues here and there, story seems generic but at least there are branches
Though the game is way too heavy for the actual content, I was surprised to go through everything that quick
Though the game is way too heavy for the actual content, I was surprised to go through everything that quick
- Mar 6, 2019
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Sandbox sucks... also add a lot of bugs and waste time updates in delay
I really suggest you to stay in the VN structure... useless click-cliick are usually to cover a not so good story line and sandbox tends to distract the user from the story
In any case I've not started to play your game bc I prefer to wait for the next large release and i love to play games with a solid story line that usually requires at least 2 weeks of story progression
I have seen some pics from the OP post... the renders style remind me "Project Sage" by Paperwork.
The model MC is very very lovely
I will post again when I will start to play..
as I understand Vanilla is useless for 30 years woman in crisis... only a great gangbang can solve her crisis issues
in any case good luck for your project.
just my opinion
- Oct 29, 2021
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This is my opinion.
1. Low quality textures of models.
2. Male models of NPC are ridiculous.
3. Animation. Incorrect placement of models in the scenes.
4. Interface. Text box is too big and too often hinders in sex scenes.
5. Story. It is ok. But revealing the motives of the antagonists pulls out of immersion. And makes the choices not so intriguing.
1. Low quality textures of models.
2. Male models of NPC are ridiculous.
3. Animation. Incorrect placement of models in the scenes.
4. Interface. Text box is too big and too often hinders in sex scenes.
5. Story. It is ok. But revealing the motives of the antagonists pulls out of immersion. And makes the choices not so intriguing.
- Jan 30, 2019
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Hey friend, the game in the gym area has already presented an error, at the time of choice.
I also have 2 videos that were made in reverse.
The first 2 videos in the locker room area with the black guy the video came out in the normal position and then in the other 2 videos in the same area the video was upside down, with Spanish speaking in the background, it looks like you were listening to the radio at the time of being making the videos and got distracted and released the videos with editing and radio sound on, something more crazy.