VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - Critical Visit [v0.11] [MonLab1]

The spelling and grammar are very rough in this VN. The story is okay and the renders are decent, but the spelling really hurts this game. If it can get a native speaker script pass it could be much better.

Played v0.10, its great, definately worth a try. The script need some final touches, there are some spelling mistakes. Everything else is just awesome and the models are heavenly. Can't wait for new updates.

Just completed v0.10. Too short, I want more. LOL! I enjoyed the subtle Femdom content. It's not like most where the women are demanding evil b**ches. I would recommend giving this game a look. Looking forward to future updates.