I quite like the concept, I like the openly slutty girlfriend and the closeted bi subby bf. But... the writing feels a very off right now.
Is English not your first language? Grammatically things are more or less correct but there's a lot of little things that are just strange.
For example:
- Girlfriend starts the game off saying she wants to meet the neighbours, I thought this meant going to the apartment but she meant visit the mall? I rolled-back the text and the mall was never mentioned before.
- MC says "I don't have pockets in my khaki shorts" even though the art clearly shows him having pockets, and the GF reaching into them, but she's somehow reaching directly to touch his dick? It would make sense if he had a hole in the pockets and wasn't wearing underwear, but that was never said.
- Girlfriend finds the phone and says "I never knew it was in your phone pocket." What the heck is a phone pocket? Did you mean his jacket pocket?
- Girlfriend first said "Fast food? Fuck no, I'm not a cheapsake" earlier but then later said "Fast food's fineeeee, we have the money." These two things contradict and don't make sense.
This might sound like just nitpicking, but the main thing I'm getting at is that everything feels a little bit OFF. Like this is just half-step away from how real people talk and interact, I could believe it if you said an AI wrote the script.
So far it's more or less something I can ignore, but then the story gets REALLY weird when the Bull Phone shows up. And now I have no idea what to think. Is this a magical phone? Is the MC hallucinating? Why does he not act more freaked out? The fact that the characters were already a little weird to begin with makes the un-reality of the Bull Phone really really confusing. It's not well established, and just pulls me out of the story entirely.
It doesn't help that this is the start of the free-roam section of the game. The MC said he had classes early, but you can't actually go to school, the only object the game has is to visit the butcher again. We're given very little direction on what the players are supposed to do, and absolutely no understandable motivation for why characters behave the way they do.
Which is a shame, like I said I like the concept, but it's hard to get invested in the story as it is written right now.