VN - Ren'Py - Cumona Beach [v0.10] [Dunderdeuce]

Talk about a mixed bag. I played about 30 minutes before I just decided to skip through the dialogue. The story was a bore and some of the interactions with the characters were a little unrealistic. There is hardly any sound and I didn't notice any music.

Now, I did love the renders and thought the characters looked pretty. I was down to see what was in store with them.....Then this happened.

The actual Sex scenes are really crappy, I'm not talking about the animations, They were actually improving, I meant the execution of the scene. As of Version .10 there's a handful of Blowjob scenes and about 5 or 6 penetration scenes. The Oral scenes are ok, but the Penetration scenes are horrible in my opinion. It's maybe one shot of a full body and then Bam, instant closeup of penetration and for the rest of the SHORT scene, Pussy/Ass closeup, then load release......

I guess some folks like that but for me? I like to see expressions, body movement, ass or tits, Hell ANYTHING other than a closeup of a Puss EVERY time. If you're going to do animations and not show off the body, might as well just not do animations.....But that's just one man's humble opinion.....

3 Stars

The story is just to bland so it gets really boring to read, theres no real plots of any kind unless you consider the sister breaking up with her best friend a plot? its all just meh.

Not sure if dev has a gag or food fetish or something but the number of times your forced to see the mother suck on a popsicle like its a dick while making weird crapy sounds is just to annoying and extremly cringy, why even force the players to watch that shit if they arent even on her route.....

But no matter how many times you pick the choice to not be on someones route dosent change a hole lot since game constantly keeps trying to push them on to you anyway by giving you choices to do shit over and over and over, game just never understands that you dont care about her no matter how many "bad" choices you have made.

Same goes for the constant ass focus, i think its the first game where theres more zoom ins on asses then tits, not that im a fan of any kind of zoom in unless it optional which is was only once with the girls in the gym where you can pick whos ass to zoom in on....ffs....

The charaters are also just to bland, mothers personality is extremly submissive which dosent really fit with her job as principel of the school.
The sister is just annoying and stupid in to many ways, she does get a little better late game if your on her path but still no real sex stuff with her.
The father is just trying to act like hes the king and everyone is below him.

As for the renders they are about average so nothing special there.

Girls are a bit bland as well even though i do like the builds of them but their faces just arent good looking, some i would even call ugly....

Animations are at best average and theres more small animations outside sex scenes then there is sex scenes which dosent make it any better.

The one thing it does have going for it, is the choices you can atleast deside who MC goes after or not so thats good, but it never stops asking you if you want to try something with the ones you turned down a miillion times so thats a bit annoying.

As for music there is none, every now and then there are some sound effects which is proberly put in to keep you awake but they arent good either and why does the girls sound like a granny, really needs a better moan for girls that are supposed to be 18.....

What really kills it is the lack of content, its 3 years old or so now and i went after 3 girls, the sister and her ex best friend and the spanking loving girl and theres only a single sex scene with one of them and nothing with the other 2, its just to much of a slow burn when a game is making players wait 3+ years for any action with the girls, even more so considreing there arent even that many girls to start with, it also makes me wonder what version 0.9 means since it dosent feel like it will be done at 1.0 unless it gets a crazy rushed ending so kinda weird.

Very sexy teasing between the pc and his mother and his sister. Renders are very good. Can't wait for more honestly. Hopefully the ultimate goal will be a threesome. Keep it up, dev. Very underrated in this community.

It's just meh, there is nothing good about this game, at best some of the aspects are average and at worst some of it is downright horrible.

The story is extremely basic, the typical "guy comes home from college, has an asshole dad, horny mom and a sister with abandonment issues". The pacing is very slow and it doesn't fill those inbetween moments with interesting interactions like some other games with slow pacing which makes it more boring.

The characters are bad, like really bad. Most of the interaction with the characters are cartoonishly bad. Let me give an example, the author wanted to show the dad as being an asshole so what did he do? He made the dad have certain subtle behaviourial traits that point to him not being a very nice guy.... I'm just kidding, the author showcased it by writing every single one of his line as "you're all losers, I'm a Chad, I'm so rich go fuck yourself". I'm not even kidding, 90% of the dad's lines can be boiled down to that.

The interactions with the mom is downright braindead, the mom character seems to be a straight up lobotomy recipient at times. The stereotypical self pitying housewife with the intelligence of a toddler, except for the fact that she is supposed to the principal of a college which straight up conflicts with every single trait on her character sheet. The icecream deepthroating sessions with mom is some of the weirdest and cringiest character interaction I've ever seen.

The sister character is very annoying and ugly looking imo. Straight up a bitch to everyone, doesn't have the ability to communicate like an adult (not just with MC, she does this with the mother and her best friend as well) and everyone just let's her get away with being a disrespectful brat to everyone.

The visuals are average, nothing too good, nothing too bad and I think the game does decent enough with giving choices regarding who you find attractive or not.

Although I generally appreciate stories that slowly develop their characters and plots with many provocations, the execution in this game leaves much to be desired. The writing suffers from poor grammar, and the characters are recurring clichés, such as the annoying sister and the cruel father—who, at least, is alive—but neglects the desperate mother's needs. As for the mother, the scenes involving lollipops or ice creams seemed strange to me.

The game consists of an extensive sequence of long dialogues and shows a lack of significant action, limited to "sticks and breasts" that do not contribute to the plot. The audio seems nonexistent, and the overall pace of the game is confusing and predictable, making the experience monotonous.

Pros:

- Normal looking woman
- Doesn't try to do too much
- Constantly improving
- Likable characters
- Top notch teasing content

Cons:

- Story doesn't really have anything going outside of the Fred scandal
- Dialogue was rough early on


This game grew on me because I thought it was going to be bland and eventually abandoned but I enjoy this. The interaction between Emma and the MC was very entertaining, I loved the teasing aspects especially the sexy time.

The grammar has gotten better as the game progressed. Frida and Emma are my favorites but Molly is the most realistic looking milf I've seen in a while. She's sexy but not overly...enhanced. This game deserves more attention and support.

I absolutely loved it! Eagerly anticipating more content. Hoping for thrilling adventures featuring Molly, Erica, and Nicole. Frankly, I could do without more of Cristina. Keep up the great work! Can't wait!

[Review of 0.9]
The pacing is all over the place, the plot is boring, the characters are all cookie-cutter stereotypes that have been done a million times, the grammar is bad and the writing is much the same.

The renders are nice and the characters are all attractive, but the game is just so boring and predictable that I don't feel it's worth the time investment.

(Version 0.9 review)

I found this to be pretty darn good. The graphics are solid, and the plot had some really strong tension building moments. It isn't a story where the MC gets to bone everyone right off the bat. Some of the people he has to tease and tempt. While others will get down to sex quickly.

Plus, the female bodies are a nice, diverse makeup. Mostly average or smaller busted, some slim hipped, some not. That broad range of bodies is a refreshing change from most games that are all big tits and hips/ass all the time.

The potential here is vast because it has the foundation to be a great game. The girls have varied personalities and it's got some good kinky stuff to go with them. Graphically, the game isn't that good or that bad its pretty average, but the writing I thought was done pretty well. It wasn't really cringy or overbearing and it was decent. The biggest negative for me I think was despite how long the game is currently, theres not much sex stuff. If I could describe it in a few words I think the best way would be endless edging. It teases you, brings you right to the edge of delivering the goods but then stops. I think this is a game worth following if you like the rather cliche setting but with a really good foundation.

Personally I actually like slow burns and lots of teasing and character building, however not when it's written and done like this.

Bad grammar aside, It's pretty clear early on that the writer is not native English speaking. It's things like saying "nice to meet you" to people you already know or calling bed linen "bedclothes".

The characters themselves are the usual bitchy Sister, the mean Dad that doesn't give the increasingly desperate Mother what she needs etc etc. You get it.

Character models are OK, a little generic but nice proportions.
One side note is the Mother looks like a teen that's had the age slider turned up lol.

The teasing and slow burn aspect of the game is good in parts but truly bizarre in others. e.g. you and your Mother having these weird secret ice-lolly sucking sessions is one of the strangest things i've seen in an adult game haha.

The actual lewd scenes are pretty good.

Overall I'd really give it a 2.5 if I could.

i like this VN very much, the writing is ok, and the renders look quite amazing at times. It has a lot of teasing, and some of the tease scenes are quite good. It starts out pretty slow, but its focus on relationship build up for every character makes it worth it every time something exciting happen, so i see great potential in the game and i cant wait to see more.

Review Written for v0.7 part 1

Good game, I really wish the updates would come faster / have more content.

I'd normally say this is a story heavy game, but it isn't so much as the story, but rather the character development that's the focus. We're on v0.7 part 1 and there are still extremely few sexual content, so if you're looking for some quick hot scenes, look the other way, this one is a slow burner. At first I thought it would be the opposite, given how oblivious the character Molly was, and how overly sexual she was whitout even realizing it. It was kind of a turn off to be honest, but it changed as the chapters flew by, and there hasn't been such scenes since then, which is a good change imo.

So far, the graphics are okay, the more sexy angles and scenes being the highest quality, while the story seems to be on lower quality renders, which is completely fair.

There are many girls in the game, with different personallities, so everyone can be pleased for sure.

The backstory is just average, or maybe a bit above average if you consider how the average with this genre is usually pretty trash. But it makes up for it with nice character personnalities and character development.

All in all, a good game that doesn't have fast enough updates.

I want to give a big score in rendering.

This dev expresses the physical characteristics of each character well, and it is detailed, and the body he describes is a realistic body based on reality but also expresses eroticism well.

It also expresses the skin and feet well in detail.

And I like the basic character design.
Diversity and non-exaggerated body expressions prove that he has good rendering and sophisticated eyes.

However, I cannot evaluate the grammatical part because I am not a native speaker.

I really do not understand how and why do people rate this visiual novel with five starts? First of all, this is more a series of endless dialogue screens than a game. If I call this a game, than then other devs would have the right to sue me for insulting the genre.

The story is so boring that after a while, I just kept skipping. Yet, without reading any script, you can still get the idea because there's nothing innovative with it. The same, classic events with lots of scripts.

For half an hour, nothing happens except for seeing dicks. Yea, this game, currently, has nothing but dicks and a few boobs, which are so unrelated.

The graphics and models are outdated and all they do is talking. Mindlessly talking. Scripts... Scripts.

I've no idea if this game has audio. I didn't bother to turn the volume on.

tl;dr: I regret my time playing this.

I have to admit, Mid-Chapter 1 I already was thinking about quitting this game because I totally disliked the writing style. Interestingly enough this changed over the chapters - maybe new Writer?

I'm glad I didn't quit because I very much liked the story and the evolution of the characters. It didn't feel forced and natural.

Review as of V0.5

I like it. The characters have their flaws and make you want to slap them but that's what's good about it IMO, they aren't copy-paste from every other game out there. It's not "Mr Irrestible MC" with every LI jumping on his dick as soon as they meet him.
It might be too slow paced for some but I think it's just right as it doesn't drown you in a wall of meaningless and repetitive stuff. But it sure isn't a game for a quick fap.
Speaking of, nothing has been forced so far so that's also a bonus for me. Although the classic mommy love is pushed the most as most games. Not a big milf fan myself but the mom in this game is good looking, just the right amount of subtle wrinkles to make her look like she's your mom and not some forever 20 looking perfect face.

Overall, definitely worth taking the time to try it.

Very promising Visual Novel! Nice and clean smooth renders, good looking models without monster hips and boobs. Slow pacing with incest relationship and very hot mom's habit that will make her easy to do some stuff in future ^_^

Here we go again with another passive guy for a MC.

So lets jump right in there.
First off the writing needs a bit of help. Proof reading is your friend. If it doesn't sound good to you, then usually it isn't right.
Second: The MC needs to turn Emma across his knee and smack the redness on her bottom.
Third: The renders are pretty decent. No error screens, or missing images. That is a huge plus

Overall
Some writing tweaks here and there and that would make the reading more enjoyable.
Give us options to actually allow the MC to not be a door mat to every one.
Hopefully things will improve as the updates continue.

Every character is frustrating as fuck! I hope that's on purpose and something's coming. Soon. I can't handle all this passiveness. Almost everybody is a massive asshole, and MC is a massive pussy. It has potential, if only something ANYTHING would happen.