VN - Ren'Py - Cursed Forest Quest [v0.4.4] [Pray For Fantasy Girls]

(for 0.4.3)
Autors need to spend less time writing and more time drawing.
Nobody gonna read all that noncence.
Give protag averge dick and dont need to make them so thin. Elf girl is good.
introduction is to long fro VN, there is no gameplay and very little of art, if you like it - just look at image in the folder, no need to "play" it

Art: 1/5
The art is a complete miss, featuring unrealistic and exaggerated anatomy. The female character has an absurdly disproportionate, hyper-curved body resembling Kim Kardashian after excessive silicone fillers and implants. Meanwhile, the male character is poorly designed, with an awkwardly tiny "pencil rod." The overall proportions are ridiculous and off-putting, making the visuals hard to take seriously.

Story: 1/5
The narrative is nonsensical and utterly unbelievable. There’s no depth, coherence, or engagement—just a shallow sequence of events that fails to hold any interest.

Gameplay: 1/5
This barely qualifies as a game. It plays more like a barebones visual novel with only two choices—one of which just loops back to the title screen. Even for an early alpha demo, the lack of content is unacceptable. Many other demos on this platform offer significantly more gameplay and substance. Calling this an "alpha" feels generous.

Crazy good art and the story/setting is decent enough. Hopefully there is audio and maybe more animated scenes in the future. Hopefully the updates can stay consistent because this one is really good!

Amazing art just hits my spot can't wait for full release and hopefully the artist wont stop at this one game! The Elf Lady Vannelle is beautiful character her slightly naive personality makes a lot of oppurtunities for Durrak to enjoy closer encounters with her and mess around bending truth to his advantage. The MC spices things up with harsh treatment, looking down on Durrak like on lowly and dirty peasant he is which hopefully will spark something in him to make MC pay for the really disrespectful and harsh treatment by corrupting and taking away his dear Wife!

Amazing art, and the main character being smart, AND reluctant makes him seem so much more realistic. The characters act like characters. The settings and even the more mundane poses are well drawn. I am excited to see where this story goes.

Like the art and story. This elf wife is one of the hottest elf ever! Juicy and round is allways hot especially when it's drawn so excitingly.
I'm crossing my fingers, rooting for this game, I hope it gets completed and this hot elf wife gets involved in many exciting adventures with many more characters.

Absolutely love it already.

The art is incredible and the dialogue is one of the few out there worth reading thoroughly, it do be gettin a lil silly sometimes but you can tell the dev is taking it seriously. The protagonist is not completely oblivious and neither is her wife, they are actually pretty aware of the guide's intentions but can't get themselves to kick him out of the party due to his indispensable knowledge of the forest; this rare dynamic gets the player glued to the screen, expectant of the development of the party's relationship.

As some of you here have already stated, this has a lot of potential and I'm very excited to see where the story goes.

And to the dev:

P.S.: I'm giving it a 5 star off the get go because it's a 5/5 at this point of development. Every game takes time so it doesn't make sense to give it less scoring just because is at 10 or 1%, and if it gets abandoned so be it, it will still be a 5/5, the content has nothing to do with the devs' decision to abandon it... plus it adds to the overall score, meaning more people will check it out and that's the point of leaving a score, it's not an personal note to remind you to not get your hopes up, come on people.

This game has a lot of potential. So far it doesn't have a lot of content, but the art style is incredible. The characters are very well written too. These kinds of games usually have annoyingly cliche oblivious and dumb protagonists but this game is different, the protagonist has a far more interesting personality that really fits this type of game. Most importantly the elf character looks very hot. The story is not rushed, it takes it's time.

This is one of those games that would be perfect if it wasn't a demo. It's pretty much nothing but build up right now. However, there are some things I REALLY like. The MC is finally not a complete idiot in an NTR game. This makes the dynamic so much more interesting and refreshing and avoids the lazy writing trap of many other games in this genre. Even better it spends just the right amount of time to establish the relationship before the corruption. It's also really refreshing that its an elf who actually has an elven culture, rather than just being a girl with pointy ears. On top of that I just really enjoy the design of the characters and the art style in general.

Because it's so common for games like these to be stuck in development hell, I can't give it a 5/5 yet. But I hope to return some day to a complete game so I can upgrade the score.

Review of [v0.3.5]

Decently plotted, enjoyed the sample so far. Short, not a lot of payoff yet.

Wish the art was less fucking ridiculous though, but it's not my creative project, so whatever. I don't want elves to look "BBL + tits so big it's impossible," and i don't need the MC to have a literal pencil dick

This is probably gonna be a Dan good Netorare game.

The art is top-tier and presses all of my buttons. Valabelle's (the MC's wife) slutty, high-cut thong leotard is hot as fuck, doubly so because it's so tight that we get both nipple outlines and a cameltoe.

The Ugly Bastard (I genuinely can't remember his name) is your stereotypical UB: He's fat, balding, has closed eyes most of the time, but when they are open, they're a milky-white, and, most importantly, he has a very obvious huge cock bulge.

Comparing to the MC, who has a penis so small his wife literally jerks him with her thumb and index finger.

Not even mentioning the diologue in the recent update is so fucking hot and is foreshadowing Valabelle's inner slut-elf. And she thinks the MC has a massive penis!

Yeah, this is gonna be a Damm good NTR game. Here's hoping it actually gets finished and isn't abandoned!

incredible, beatiful, very very awesome, i love it, I love your work, very well done in everything, I will support you as soon as I can, we look forward to your next update but take your time (excuse my English, it's not my native language)

10/10, this game is an absolute gem in a sea of mediocrity. The female elven model is insanely good, gorgeous, well-designed, and a breath of fresh air compared to the ugly, goblina looking ass, crap we usually get. The story is engaging, and it’s clear the dev actually cared about making something great. It’s rare to find a game this good when everything else feels like lazy ass shit. Do yourself a favor and play this, it’s worth.

Almost perfect game, i think there's too much text in the beginning, good art and animations. Please continue with the teasing and flashing parts, don't rush the main act!!! Note: add more characters male and female......

I know the game is just starting but based on what I've seen this has the potentially to be just as good as Karyn's prison or maybe better than all other games. 10/10 animation, 10/10 pacing, 10/10 teasing and the corruption is well done. Just really welly done overall.
Keep it up!

The non anime fan review not liking it. Shocking. On the same hand, it may surprise you just how good this game actually is. Knowing what you like before playing a game is always a good idea. If anime-style art and tropes aren’t your thing, you probably won’t enjoy this. You should be able to figure this out yourself...

This game has insane potential. The art is phenomenal. The story is great. The music is excellent. It’s the whole package. I’m giving it a 4/5 for now because it’s too early to call it a perfect 5. But with the direction it’s going it probably will be, and I’ll update my review if that happens.

The FMC is extremely voluptuous and attractive. Usually those proportions aren’t for me. I am more of a medium is premium person. But as long as the proportions fit the character's body I’m fine with it. It’s rare to pull off without making them look weird but this artist nailed it. She looks hot as hell. Great start to a game.

I have to rate this 5 stars because the quality is so incredible that it harksens back to some of the best NTR games and VNs ever made. I'll tell you why:

-Art- 99999999999/10

In an age plagued by AI art you have one of the hottest FMCs ever made by man. The background art has characters, as well as the NPC ugly bastards even. The woman at the bar, the MC's tiny pp. Especially the FMC which is the main thing ppl care about in a hentai game lol. She has such amazing character in just her art alone. She feels like a character you'd really find in an isekai hentai world.

-Characters- 9999999/10

You have very high class characters and they are coming into a town of peasants. They act very realistically and want to be treated as their upper class selves. The world and characters feel very real. There's no trying to make them seem like noble saints. They seem like real people who just care about their business. The place feels like it's really set in some fantasy world.
The FMC Elf Woman believes elves to be a superior race and you're not afraid to explore that and make her act high and mighty. Her disdain of humans doesn't take away from her hotness either but makes her feel more real. It also sets up really well if she eventually becomes a fuck slave for one of the peasants lol.

The World 10/10

Feels very real. Ranted on this a lot above.

The Story 10/10

There are a lot of places this story can go and a lot of routes this can take. I feel like the pacing is good and he isn't going to go too slow. This is hentai so we want spicy stuff. I would be interested in seeing the Elf FMC's corruption and her changing interactions with her husband/lover. Also his reaction, lust, jealousy, helplessness would be fun to explore. The story is obviously very hentai. You have a small cock MC score a busty elf, but that's actually the charm of the game for me. It's very hentai and this IS a hentai game hahaha.

v0.2.4

I have to call it like I see it. I don't get the other reviews at all. I've played tons of games, and this one is just for a specific crowd, probably anime fans.

The story is boring and ridiculous. It doesn't feel real at all - not because of the fantasy setting, but because the character relationships are absurd.

The art is not appealing to me whatsoever. The only good thing about this game is the music.

First of all this is not a game, it has no game mechanics or choices as it is a kinetic novel like the dev says. So 0 interaction except for reading and seeing the story develop. Nothing wrong with that just don't call it a game.

That said i like the story and the pacing, but this game would be infinitely better if it had some kind of choices with some kind of influence on how it unfolds.

This game has the potential to be one of my all-time greats based on what I'm seeing in these early releases. It's RARE for me to find a game that checks every single one of my boxes, and does them well. The art and character personalities are so perfect for this setting, especially for Vallabelle. Her feelings of superiority to humans to the point that she's naive to what they're capable of is a really unique portrayal of a common trope in this genre. I wish the best of luck to the devs, and I hope they stick to their vision, as this level of quality is hard to come by these days.